Haiku

mist hovers...silent... glassy pond...lotus flower ...warm breeze...ripples swirl... May 14, 2018

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/3/2018 5:11:00 PM

you got in a lot of summery description in your three short lines! Congrats in the summer contest.

Susan Gentry

Date: 6/2/2018 9:54:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in the summer haiku contest with this true haiku! I enjoyed.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/2/2018 7:16:00 AM

- Congratulations on your Haiku with a great summer theme, Gershon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/15/2018 4:05:00 PM

very lovely imagery for summer.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/16/2018 10:43:00 AM

High praise, indeed, Andrea. Very much appreciated. Best wishes, Gershon

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/15/2018 8:40:00 AM

Love "glassy pond" and "ripples swirl" - makes me feel like I'm there!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/15/2018 11:05:00 AM

Michelle, your comment is dear to my heart. If this poem has created this feeling in you, then I have succeeded 'beyond my wildest dreams.' You certainly have made my day, if not my 'life as a (part-time, two-bit) poet!' Thank you so much! :) gw

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/15/2018 7:29:00 AM

Beautifully written Gershon :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/15/2018 2:14:00 AM

That early morning mist, a sure sign of a scorching summers day. Tom.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/15/2018 11:07:00 AM

You're on it, Tom! Mid-day summer hazy heat, here we come! Thanks for visit and the observation! Best wishes, gershon