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Free At Last

(form 5-7-5 kawanagi) waking up alone liberating morning sun careless and carefree Submitted on April 23, 2018 for contest HAIKU: HUMAN NATURE sponsored by Mick Talbot - RANKED 1ST

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Abdul Malik

Date: 4/27/2018 5:41:00 PM

A scenario I often dream about! Nice one.

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/27/2018 8:42:00 PM

Just break free form your shackles, Abdul! So easily said, right!?

Janis Thompson

Date: 4/27/2018 2:25:00 PM

Much congratulations on a fine haiku.

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/27/2018 8:42:00 PM

Thank you so much, Sian. Much appreciated.

Jan Allison

Date: 4/27/2018 2:01:00 PM

Many congratulations on your win in the haiku contest Line:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/27/2018 8:42:00 PM

Thank you so much, Jan. Much appreciated.

L. J. Carber

Date: 4/27/2018 8:49:00 AM

Congrats Line, a true haiku!

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/27/2018 8:43:00 PM

LOL Thanks L.J. Much appreciated.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/27/2018 8:43:00 AM

Nicely done, Line! Congrats!

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/27/2018 8:43:00 PM

Thanks, Kim, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Susan Gentry

Date: 4/27/2018 7:41:00 AM

Congratulations Line on your win with this refreshing well-written haiku!

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/27/2018 8:43:00 PM

Thank you so much, Susan. Much appreciated.

Moon Flower

Date: 4/27/2018 7:41:00 AM

This got me thinking...couldn't get enough of your 'ku, Line. :) Congrats!

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/27/2018 8:45:00 PM

Awesome, Moon Flower. The best haiku are supplemented by the reader's imagination. Good teamwork! Most appreciated.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/27/2018 6:27:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great haiku, Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/27/2018 6:44:00 AM

Thank you, Sunshine, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Eve Roper

Date: 4/26/2018 11:38:00 PM

Nicely done, Line, congratulations on your win!! Hugs

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/27/2018 6:44:00 AM

Thanks, Eve. Much appreciated.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/24/2018 8:46:00 PM

woke up careless and carefree. Sweet use of these words, Line. Good luck in the contest.

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/24/2018 9:01:00 PM

Thank you so much, Caren, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/23/2018 5:57:00 PM

Wonderful! The sun is indeed liberating.

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/24/2018 9:01:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Andrea.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/23/2018 12:52:00 PM

line, charmed by your 'spring-y' feel!...congrats with huggs!

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/23/2018 1:06:00 PM

Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, nette.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 4/23/2018 10:32:00 AM

Perfect, Line...fits today here in Miinie-sowta....2' of snow, blizzards and 10 degrees wk ago...70 degrees today, sunny...only dumptruck plow-mounds of 30' high snow remains! ( be end-o-may 'fore melts) Black Krim heirloom tomato sprouts lovin' my mornin' sun! ('bout 30 plants 4" high now!)will plant end-o-may! Love...jim

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/23/2018 11:02:00 AM

Thanks, Jim. Lovely weather up here is Canada. Went across the street barefoot in sandals this morning. No more snow!!

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/23/2018 10:28:00 AM

Oh yes, love this, liberating Haiku.

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/23/2018 11:03:00 AM

Thank you, Harry. Most appreciated.

Anisha Dutta

Date: 4/23/2018 10:13:00 AM

Nice Haiku. Congrats n Love.

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/23/2018 11:03:00 AM

Thanks, Anisha. Most appreciated.