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Free At Last

waking up alone
liberating morning sun
careless and carefree



AP: 2nd place 2026

Submitted on April 23, 2018 for contest HAIKU: HUMAN NATURE sponsored by Mick Talbot  -  RANKED 1ST

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Abdul Malik Mandani

April 27, 2018 at 5:41 PM

A scenario I often dream about! Nice one.

Line Gauthier

April 27, 2018 at 8:42 PM

Just break free form your shackles, Abdul! So easily said, right!?

Janis Medders Tobechi

April 27, 2018 at 2:25 PM

Much congratulations on a fine haiku.

Line Gauthier

April 27, 2018 at 8:42 PM

Thank you so much, Sian. Much appreciated.

Jan Allison

April 27, 2018 at 2:01 PM

Many congratulations on your win in the haiku contest Line:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier

April 27, 2018 at 8:42 PM

Thank you so much, Jan. Much appreciated.

L. J. Carber

April 27, 2018 at 8:49 AM

Congrats Line, a true haiku!

Line Gauthier

April 27, 2018 at 8:43 PM

LOL Thanks L.J. Much appreciated.

Kim Rodrigues

April 27, 2018 at 8:43 AM

Nicely done, Line! Congrats!

Line Gauthier

April 27, 2018 at 8:43 PM

Thanks, Kim, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Susan Gentry

April 27, 2018 at 7:41 AM

Congratulations Line on your win with this refreshing well-written haiku!

Line Gauthier

April 27, 2018 at 8:43 PM

Thank you so much, Susan. Much appreciated.

Moon Flower

April 27, 2018 at 7:41 AM

This got me thinking...couldn't get enough of your 'ku, Line. :) Congrats!

Line Gauthier

April 27, 2018 at 8:45 PM

Awesome, Moon Flower. The best haiku are supplemented by the reader's imagination. Good teamwork! Most appreciated.

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 27, 2018 at 6:27 AM

- Congratulations on your great haiku, Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier

April 27, 2018 at 6:44 AM

Thank you, Sunshine, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Eve Roper

April 26, 2018 at 11:38 PM

Nicely done, Line, congratulations on your win!! Hugs

Line Gauthier

April 27, 2018 at 6:44 AM

Thanks, Eve. Much appreciated.

Caren Krutsinger

April 24, 2018 at 8:46 PM

woke up careless and carefree. Sweet use of these words, Line. Good luck in the contest.

Line Gauthier

April 24, 2018 at 9:01 PM

Thank you so much, Caren, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Andrea Dietrich

April 23, 2018 at 5:57 PM

Wonderful! The sun is indeed liberating.

Line Gauthier

April 24, 2018 at 9:01 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Andrea.

Nette Onclaud

April 23, 2018 at 12:52 PM

line, charmed by your 'spring-y' feel!...congrats with huggs!

Line Gauthier

April 23, 2018 at 1:06 PM

Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, nette.

James Marshall Goff

April 23, 2018 at 10:32 AM

Perfect, Line...fits today here in Miinie-sowta....2' of snow, blizzards and 10 degrees wk ago...70 degrees today, sunny...only dumptruck plow-mounds of 30' high snow remains! ( be end-o-may 'fore melts) Black Krim heirloom tomato sprouts lovin' my mornin' sun! ('bout 30 plants 4" high now!)will plant end-o-may! Love...jim

Line Gauthier

April 23, 2018 at 11:02 AM

Thanks, Jim. Lovely weather up here is Canada. Went across the street barefoot in sandals this morning. No more snow!!