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Haiku - Tangerine Sky

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oh sweet october
with your sunlit lovely clouds -
                       drifting up above

deep tangerine sky
was pink a moment ago - 
                       now it is bright red

shifting and swirling
cinnamon and purple view -
                       landscape kissing sky


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August 19, 2015


Poetry/Haiku/tangerine sky
Copyright Protected, ID 15-7011-95-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written Under Pseudonym.


Written for the contest, October Sky, 
sponsor, Skat, 

First Place

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Skat A

Date: 9/2/2015 12:00:00 AM

Broken, thank you for the October Sky (three headed haiku) WIN.... SKAT

Eve Roper

Date: 8/31/2015 5:49:00 PM

Back to congratulate you "Bravo" Hugs Eve

Sandra Haight

Date: 8/31/2015 11:48:00 AM

Congratulations on your top win, Brokken. Your lovely imagery brings this visual to life. Hugs, Sandra

Anindya Mohan Tagore

Date: 8/31/2015 10:00:00 AM

Wonderful expressions... Congrats on your deserving win ... Cheers , Bobby

James Inman

Date: 8/31/2015 7:18:00 AM

I hope I'm sensing a smile on your face. You deserve it.

Michael Tor

Date: 8/31/2015 6:18:00 AM

Congratulations nice job.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/31/2015 4:44:00 AM

Ah that's a lovely string of haikus broken! Perfect to the pic, Congrats on first place win!

Jan Allison

Date: 8/31/2015 1:19:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/30/2015 10:27:00 PM

BW, this was a beauty to behold. Congratulations on your top win:-)Alexis

Eve Roper

Date: 8/25/2015 11:34:00 PM

Wonderful description of the imagery a 7 and good luck in the contest. hugs eve

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/20/2015 3:59:00 PM

Constance, these are all three nice but that last one is SPLENDIFOUROUS!! (my own word I created. haha)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/20/2015 12:58:00 PM

Very descriptive contest entry..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for your visit to my page..Have you seen the movie October Sky? It is a good one..Thanks for stopping by..I do like the use of color in your Haiku..Sara

Eric Boddie

Date: 8/20/2015 11:29:00 AM

October sky is so special to me....October is when I began my destiny....nearly 40 years ago and it has been fun....I take it one day at a time, new obstacles are sure to come....;)

Frederic Parker

Date: 8/20/2015 9:53:00 AM

An artist painting with words, I've seen what you imagined by your words in my mind while reading your poem..good luck my poetic friend..you should do well