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a hummingbird came drifting among my flowers- cat watched from the porch _______________________ June 18, 2019 Poetry/Haiku/hummingbird Copyright Protected, ID 19-1157-635-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Bird or Bees Haiku sponsor, Tania Kitchin, Syllables 575, Verified on HowManySyllables Fourth Place

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/22/2019 6:56:00 PM

Cute imagery, dear Constance. Congrats on the well deserved win

Constance La France
Date: 6/23/2019 2:49:00 PM

Andrea, I love hummers and thanks for the congrats !

Paul Callus

Date: 6/22/2019 4:41:00 PM

Yours is a delightful image, Constance. Unlike some people, your cat is a well trained bird watcher:) Congrats on your fine win. Regards // paul

Constance La France
Date: 6/23/2019 2:50:00 PM

Paul, thanks for the compliment and the congrats, my cat likes to look but would not know what to do with a real live bird ( I think!!)~

Ann Gilmour

Date: 6/22/2019 2:53:00 AM

Many congrats on your beautiful win Constance. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Constance La France
Date: 6/22/2019 7:30:00 AM

Ann, thanks so much for the beautiful and the congrats !

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 6/22/2019 1:09:00 AM

Nice Dear Heart, I can imagine your cat looking back and forth wishing!

Constance La France
Date: 6/22/2019 7:30:00 AM

Timothy, thanks for visiting, and you forgot the chattering ~

Line Gauthier

Date: 6/21/2019 8:38:00 PM

Lovely, Constance. Congrats on your premier win.

Constance La France
Date: 6/22/2019 7:31:00 AM

Line, thanks for the lovely and the congrats !

Laura Leiser

Date: 6/21/2019 7:54:00 PM

Great twist to your creative haiku, Constance! Congrats on your win! :)

Constance La France
Date: 6/22/2019 7:31:00 AM

Laura, thanks for the congrats and comment ~

Tania Kitchin

Date: 6/21/2019 6:57:00 PM

Constance, congratulations on your winning placement in my contest with your lovely haiku, love the cat imagery, enjoyed!

Constance La France
Date: 6/22/2019 7:32:00 AM

Tania, thanks for another inspiring contest and for my fine placement ~

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/21/2019 6:46:00 AM

Hilarious to me, as I have seen photos of that cat, and I know that cat and my cat would both be wiggling their butts, getting ready for the kill jump.

Constance La France
Date: 6/21/2019 2:52:00 PM

Caren, lol, you got it, a lot of wiggling of the butt and some silly chattering noises, thanks for visiting ~

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/20/2019 3:27:00 PM

A beautiful reality moment.

Constance La France
Date: 6/20/2019 6:10:00 PM

Kim, thanks for the beautiful !

Sandra Adams

Date: 6/20/2019 8:13:00 AM

i see you and i chose the same bird! I have visits from them all the time on my porch! I have videos on my facebook of them, if i didn't hang the feeder soon enough they would buzz by my head and hoover in front of me! lovely haiku!

Constance La France
Date: 6/20/2019 9:26:00 AM

Sandra thanks for visiting my prom. I get hummingbirds on my porch too even though I have a cat !