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a hummingbird came drifting among my flowers- cat watched from the porch _______________________ June 18, 2019 Poetry/Haiku/hummingbird Copyright Protected, ID 19-1157-635-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Bird or Bees Haiku sponsor, Tania Kitchin, Syllables 575, Verified on HowManySyllables Fourth Place

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Date: 6/22/2019 6:56:00 PM
Cute imagery, dear Constance. Congrats on the well deserved win
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Dear Heart- Wiishkobe Ode
Date: 6/23/2019 2:49:00 PM
Andrea, I love hummers and thanks for the congrats !
Date: 6/22/2019 4:41:00 PM
Yours is a delightful image, Constance. Unlike some people, your cat is a well trained bird watcher:) Congrats on your fine win. Regards // paul
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Dear Heart- Wiishkobe Ode
Date: 6/23/2019 2:50:00 PM
Paul, thanks for the compliment and the congrats, my cat likes to look but would not know what to do with a real live bird ( I think!!)~
Date: 6/22/2019 2:53:00 AM
Many congrats on your beautiful win Constance. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Dear Heart- Wiishkobe Ode
Date: 6/22/2019 7:30:00 AM
Ann, thanks so much for the beautiful and the congrats !
Date: 6/22/2019 1:09:00 AM
Nice Dear Heart, I can imagine your cat looking back and forth wishing!
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Dear Heart- Wiishkobe Ode
Date: 6/22/2019 7:30:00 AM
Timothy, thanks for visiting, and you forgot the chattering ~
Date: 6/21/2019 8:38:00 PM
Lovely, Constance. Congrats on your premier win.
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Dear Heart- Wiishkobe Ode
Date: 6/22/2019 7:31:00 AM
Line, thanks for the lovely and the congrats !
Date: 6/21/2019 7:54:00 PM
Great twist to your creative haiku, Constance! Congrats on your win! :)
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Dear Heart- Wiishkobe Ode
Date: 6/22/2019 7:31:00 AM
Laura, thanks for the congrats and comment ~
Date: 6/21/2019 6:57:00 PM
Constance, congratulations on your winning placement in my contest with your lovely haiku, love the cat imagery, enjoyed!
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Dear Heart- Wiishkobe Ode
Date: 6/22/2019 7:32:00 AM
Tania, thanks for another inspiring contest and for my fine placement ~
Date: 6/21/2019 6:46:00 AM
Hilarious to me, as I have seen photos of that cat, and I know that cat and my cat would both be wiggling their butts, getting ready for the kill jump.
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Dear Heart- Wiishkobe Ode
Date: 6/21/2019 2:52:00 PM
Caren, lol, you got it, a lot of wiggling of the butt and some silly chattering noises, thanks for visiting ~
Date: 6/21/2019 12:45:00 AM
Well crafted haiku... Cat knows.
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Dear Heart- Wiishkobe Ode
Date: 6/21/2019 2:53:00 PM
Wayne, the cat thinks she knows, I am watching her too !
Date: 6/20/2019 3:27:00 PM
A beautiful reality moment.
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Dear Heart- Wiishkobe Ode
Date: 6/20/2019 6:10:00 PM
Kim, thanks for the beautiful !
Date: 6/20/2019 8:13:00 AM
i see you and i chose the same bird! I have visits from them all the time on my porch! I have videos on my facebook of them, if i didn't hang the feeder soon enough they would buzz by my head and hoover in front of me! lovely haiku!
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Dear Heart- Wiishkobe Ode
Date: 6/20/2019 9:26:00 AM
Sandra thanks for visiting my prom. I get hummingbirds on my porch too even though I have a cat !