Haiga - Enigmatic Moment

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Inspired by Brian Strands' Imagine contest and Edward Hoppers' "Automat"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Goff Avatar
November 7, 2009 at 5:06 AM
Congrats Robin! really cool haiga! jimbo
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
October 24, 2009 at 4:42 AM
Congratulations, Robin, on placing in Brian’s Imagine contest with this wonderful haiku. Your creativity shines with these vertical lines. Smiles, Dane Ann
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October 23, 2009 at 12:05 PM
Robin, I just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on having this creative poem chosen as one of the winner's in Brian's contest. Enjoyed reading it again. Karen
Augustus Avatar
October 19, 2009 at 1:07 PM
Wow! Another winner! I love how you wrote this and I'm really impressed with this. This is beyond a well deserved win for the contest. Really love it!
Golden Avatar
October 18, 2009 at 10:11 PM
I love this Robin! You've done a fantastic job with this one..,a true Haiga! Congratulations on your placing in the contest! Hugs, Donna
Brown Avatar
October 18, 2009 at 6:27 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Robin. Love, Carol
Strand Avatar
October 18, 2009 at 1:15 AM
Congrats on your success in my contest Robin.Rgds Brian.My latest contest'Poet Laureate' is now open.
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October 13, 2009 at 5:41 PM
I like this Japanese style haiku--gives your poem an interesting visual effect. The first line really fits the picture. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing! Karen
Strand Avatar
October 11, 2009 at 11:36 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest Robin.Rgds Brian
La France Avatar
October 11, 2009 at 7:29 PM
Very creative...love it.. good luck in the contest .. looks like a winner to me
Richards Avatar
October 11, 2009 at 5:55 PM
Very imaginative, artistic, and deep in thought! ~ Well done! Love, Carrie
Freeman Avatar
October 11, 2009 at 5:12 PM
Awesome piece Robin, Sincerely, Love, Mose
Fraser Avatar
October 11, 2009 at 1:55 PM
Kool piece Robin, best of luck in Brian's contest >> James
Brown Avatar
October 11, 2009 at 12:24 PM
Robin. I wish you the very best in the contest. Love, Carol
Kelly Avatar
October 11, 2009 at 11:52 AM
Best of luck in the contest , QR ...
Moreno Avatar
October 11, 2009 at 11:33 AM
Nice haiga/ekphrasis Robin, it's hard to try and straighten the letters out. Best of luck in the contest...Raul
Devonshire Avatar
October 11, 2009 at 11:12 AM
This is so lovely, Robin. To me the image appears to be teardrops falling. Great work! Good luck in the contest. Love you, Carolyn
George   Avatar
October 11, 2009 at 10:53 AM
Very creative, dear Robin. Best wishes in Brian's contest. And - thank you for your kind comments. love, Lainie
Kendrick Avatar
October 11, 2009 at 10:42 AM
I can see this in the picture. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest. Keep writing. Sara
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