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Haibun - a Wake Upon Time's Surface

A Wake Upon Time’s Surface
A distant breeze beckons, tugs at passion’s anchors, a soft mist obscures the future. I sit idly, rocked by the rippling of time’s passing, soothed by the wind whispering its secrets to dancing leaves, becalmed in an eddy of circular beauty. I watch as a cautious doe shields her fawn, a swan leads me away from his nesting mate, turtles seeking sun climb fallen trees. I feel the shadow of the circling Osprey’s chill. A turtle’s head slowly withdraws, the bullfrogs go silent, the beaver slaps a warning,my paddle stirs the moment, a wake upon time’s surface.
no rsvp nature’s unintended hosts welcome mat withdrawn
©5/4/2018 for haibun Poetry Contest Mick Talbot sponsor

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Date: 7/7/2018 5:24:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your winning work. Congrats. Sara
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Date: 7/7/2018 7:01:00 AM
A journey into wonderland, no rsvp needed, your win, my congratulations free, in the wake, ripples of my memories thank you John.
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Date: 7/6/2018 11:50:00 PM
Congrats! Beautiful and I love animals.
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Date: 7/6/2018 9:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve I have always been confused with initialism of RSVP; French = répondez s'il vous plaît or English = please reply"... ;-)
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Date: 7/6/2018 2:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win. What a beautiful haibun! I enjoyed. :)
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Date: 7/6/2018 4:41:00 AM
interesting message, though havn't experienced that paddling. Have been accepted amongst floating bird flocks and swam alongside by penguins etc. Well deserved winner.
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Date: 7/5/2018 4:12:00 PM
Wonderful! Congrats!
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