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Gypsy Dance - New Rhyming Couplet Contest

Swirling and twirling the gypsy dances Skirt all askew gaining wanton glances penned 7/6/2013

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Ilene Bauer

Date: 6/17/2013 7:07:00 PM

great couplet! congrats on your win!

Skat A

Date: 6/15/2013 5:31:00 PM

super poem super win. *love ~SKAT

Seren Roberts
Date: 6/16/2013 12:16:00 AM

Thank you SKAT I do appreciate comments ...Seren

Judy Konos

Date: 6/14/2013 4:17:00 PM

Seren Supreme! Congrats

Seren Roberts
Date: 6/15/2013 4:21:00 AM

Thank you Judy ...Seren

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 6/14/2013 3:57:00 PM

Beautiful and nice piece,Seren...Congrats on your classic win...

Seren Roberts
Date: 6/15/2013 4:22:00 AM

Thank you OA ...Seren

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/14/2013 3:52:00 PM

Congrad's Light & Love

Seren Roberts
Date: 6/15/2013 4:22:00 AM

thank you Andrea ...Seren

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/14/2013 3:50:00 PM

Congrad's Light & Love

Heather Ober

Date: 6/14/2013 7:18:00 AM

Congratulations, Seren! I love the rhymes and alliteration in this one :)

Seren Roberts
Date: 6/14/2013 11:13:00 AM

Thank you Heather ...Seren

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 6/14/2013 5:58:00 AM

congratulations Seren a brilliant no 1

Seren Roberts
Date: 6/14/2013 11:13:00 AM

Thanks Mandy, I am amazed ...Seren

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/14/2013 12:24:00 AM

congrats, this is excellent,,,

Seren Roberts
Date: 6/14/2013 12:25:00 AM

Thanks Harry ..glad you saw it .....Seren

Audrey Haick

Date: 6/13/2013 8:02:00 PM

I break into smiles reading this as the imagery is perfect,Seren! Congratulations! Always, Annalise

Seren Roberts
Date: 6/14/2013 12:26:00 AM

Hi Annalise and thank you ...Seren

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/13/2013 7:28:00 PM

Love it! It seems we are both drawn to dancing. Congratulations.

Seren Roberts
Date: 6/14/2013 12:27:00 AM

Obviously the winning formula ...Seren

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/13/2013 3:54:00 PM

I love yours, lady!!! Congrats.

Seren Roberts
Date: 6/13/2013 6:47:00 PM

wow thank you Andrea, where did that piece of brilliance come from haha will go and try and find where ...Seren

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 6/13/2013 3:53:00 PM

Wonderful- those gypsies! congrats. BG

Seren Roberts
Date: 6/13/2013 6:48:00 PM

Thank you BG even i liked it ....Seren

Tim Ryerson

Date: 6/13/2013 3:09:00 PM

Hi Seren - I recall seeing a famous painting of gypsies dancing...Is that what inspired this poem?...Regardless, you have painted a beautiful and vivid picture here...Congratulations on your top spot - Tim

Seren Roberts
Date: 6/13/2013 6:48:00 PM

Tim to be totally honest i dont know where I dragged this one up from, I wish I did ....Seren

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 6/13/2013 2:54:00 PM

I really love this. Dance of language. Congratulations on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie

Seren Roberts
Date: 6/13/2013 3:05:00 PM

Hi Conne, thank you for the congrats.....Seren

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 6/13/2013 10:01:00 AM

Seren I am thrilled for you congrats and such a jewel of a couplet Shadow x

Seren Roberts
Date: 6/13/2013 11:33:00 AM

Thank you Shadow I am amazed ....Seren

Kim Merryman

Date: 6/7/2013 9:42:00 PM

Love the imagery, Seren! Love, Kim

Seren Roberts
Date: 6/8/2013 12:11:00 AM

Thank you Kim ....Seren

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/7/2013 3:11:00 PM

this one is really picturesque for me. I love to see them dance!!

Seren Roberts
Date: 6/8/2013 12:12:00 AM

Hi Andrea, yes they make a colourful sight....Seren