Terry Miller Poet Rondeau

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I saw this today in a parking garage and took the picture, it was such a mystery

 

Gypsophila

Soft baby's breath in prim nosegay
abandoned in a parking bay.
A whispered message left behind; 
perhaps a gesture was declined?
An assignation underway?

Meet me, my dear, floor three, bay A;
I'll leave you there a small bouquet;
you know which, your favorite kind,
soft baby's breath.

Lovers, perhaps, the kind that stray,
who have to meet this secret way?
Upon the spray, a note thus signed;
my love for you is unconfined
I'll prove, with buds, I leave each day
soft baby's breath.

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Jack Horne October 12, 2022 at 6:36 AM lovely write inspired by this intriguing mystery Terry Miller October 13, 2022 at 2:06 AM Thank you, Jack. I appreciate your visit and kind comments

Vickey Rhymer October 9, 2022 at 10:11 PM Wonder what took place.A mystery! Love unconfined lovely sentiment in the right space and time unwanted stalking in another.Yep, A mystery.Enjoyed also the photo as well. Terry Miller October 11, 2022 at 8:40 AM It was indeed a mystery; thank you for your visit and kind comments.

Speaks Volumes October 9, 2022 at 1:19 PM She saw the flowers and just left them there ? She must have seen them, because the note asking her to meet him there was left behind. Unrequited love can be such a sad feeling. Terry Your poem in intriguing. I cant leave it. I have read it over and over, trying decide what happened in that parking bay. Thank you for arousing my curiosity. I may have baby's breath on my mind all day! ! ! ! Terry Miller October 11, 2022 at 8:41 AM It was on my mind for a few days, too; thank you for reading this poem and your comments