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Gym-Nastiespart Two

Sweating, bench pressing, ripping my chest.. Urgg, the final stretch. Whew, she breezes by. Crop dusting her "love Spell Perfume". WOW, my eyes follow her across the room. In dream-land, I've lost focus, under hypnosis, now "tailing" that tail. bent over, tan thighs. That apple bottom caught my eye. No surprise though, I'm a booty kind of guy. Those blue latex tights, fit your hips so right. I fight, fight my growing urge. Candy for my eyes, such visual delight. I can't focus on my work-out, with that magnificent sight. Sweet, caramel apple, ample eye candy. Erotic, mass provoking, thoughts encourage Gym-Nasties... **Concluding the Gym-Nasties collaboration started by Linda-Marie Bariana "Sweetheart" Jared Pickett 12/17/09 Asavvy1

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 12/28/2009 1:21:00 PM

Its always about caramel..sweet poem indeed..Lets do the workout:) Charma

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 12/27/2009 9:30:00 PM

naoughty poem, made me smile!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/22/2009 12:34:00 PM

SOUP MAIL 4 U Lone Wolf ... "Sweetheart"

Richard Pickett

Date: 12/22/2009 5:18:00 AM

You always were a booty kind of guy...I like it a little higher up/// Nicely done son... Watch those weights that they don't fall on you while you booty tootie... Dad

Daver Austin

Date: 12/19/2009 8:40:00 AM

This one put me in traction. Oh, to be young again. Love, daver

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/19/2009 6:37:00 AM

Glad we work well together and looking forward to our next adventure... are u snowed in this Saturday morning? I can't even see my car let alone get to it... good thing I am all finished shopping for the big day this week... this storm is God's way of saying.. Hey its MY BIRTHDAY... concentrate on me... gifts are great but I AM the GREATEST GIFT of all... and that is the reson we got the worst storm since 1960 and its not over yet... blessings... luv.. "Sweetheart"

James Fraser

Date: 12/18/2009 12:36:00 PM

Superb conclusion Jared, a quite excellent piece to finish off your co-write. Well done to the both of you >> James

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 12/17/2009 9:58:00 PM

LOL. Perhaps from now on you can exercise with your eyes closed, especially if you are really pursuing the goal of good health. Thanks for sharing so honestly. Caroline.

Marty Owens

Date: 12/17/2009 7:48:00 PM

Very nice...wow! Enjoyed...Marty

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/17/2009 5:23:00 PM

Wonderful ending Jared and I got caught up in the moment here.. I may post the whole poem again on my list if it will all fit.. don't know.. maybe experiement... not tonight.. football Colts-Jags.. 13-0.. NO I am not a Jets fan but Joe Willie was and is the best in NFL history... professionally and personally... ??? but only the GIANTS have my heart at the moment... don't know why u like the BRONCOS but its going to be a fun Wild Card season.. great job.. luv.. "Sweetie"

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/17/2009 12:45:00 PM

"Crop dusting her'"love Spell Perfume'" offers quite an intriguing and creative image, Jared. You and Linda-Marie have created quite a wonderful collaboration! Congrats to both of you on this work. Love and holiday blessings, Carolyn