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Gust of Wind on the Seine Bridge - Louis Anquetin

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read a little bit about thought experiments, some synopsis on philosophical ideas, watched half a program on the solar system and storm worlds, then incidentally wrote a poem.

Tethered to the omnibus, weathering storms ~ lean into it, hang on, become the wisp. As perception shapes and shifts, our eyes sting, blind spots get filled in; create echo filters. Bringing us to our knees ~ we hold on to our hats, on a turbulent day, unsure if it's our own creation. It lasts 24 hours, or 1 week; we construct it minute by minute, define its perimeters, suffer by them ~ welcome rain, feel blighted by it. Nothing is solid, nothing is change ~ except the carriage, pulled ever onwards, bringing it home The gravitas of the situation, unless set off by a fright, would be linear; has a penchant for straight lines. Forget breathing in and out ~ it's done for you. We are part mechanical, part ether. Personally, I'm neither streamlined ~ nor anchored. Perhaps you are, in this moment. Maybe one day, the foundation of each being begins its unravel. Every ancestor wails from within; atoms of consciousness separate ~ claw at the walls for release, for peace, to join the clouds ~ only to find that weather can't promise calm. Perpetual turmoil, as empathy battles cold. Ridiculous to hang on, or be carried away ~ bruises blue-black either way, until it's suddenly all okay.

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Date: 12/28/2024 7:37:00 AM
Dear DD, your verse animates the artwork so beautifully and speaks for this piece with elegant eloquence. Congratulations for your success in Ink’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 12/28/2024 1:07:00 PM
Thank you Susan, it was nice to be able to share this poem beyond just my own page. Thank you for stopping by and your kind words, appreciated x
Date: 12/25/2024 7:11:00 AM
this is so deeply moving, well written for the picture, googled the art to see what youv interpreted , and i must say as always it is impressive how youv highlighted so many elements in the artwork so well here: i especially felt the emotions in "Nothing is solid, nothing is change ~ ” and “Personally, I'm neither streamlined ~ nor anchored. ” those words resonate so deep! Thank you for sharing this jewel! You have an eye for details! An artistic take! Soulful too! Congratulations on your win
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Date: 12/25/2024 1:23:00 PM
Thank you so much, a real honour to place in this contest x

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