Guns

Guns are safe, trigger finger shoots to thrill

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Hidden Sister

Date: 2/27/2013 9:29:00 PM

Good write!

Joseph May

Date: 2/26/2013 6:21:00 PM

congrats on your win Seren

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/26/2013 4:28:00 PM

hey, I think I never saw this one before. Congratulations, Seren. I love the last part using similar sounding word thrill in place of kill.

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 2/26/2013 11:04:00 AM

Congratulations on your grand win friend Seren, Cheers!! (^_^)

Seren Roberts
Date: 2/26/2013 3:19:00 PM

Thank you Maria

Kash Poet

Date: 2/26/2013 10:21:00 AM

Congrats on your win Seren.Love it.

Seren Roberts
Date: 2/26/2013 3:20:00 PM

Hi Kash thank you

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/26/2013 10:13:00 AM

Hi girl big congratulations on your no 1 xx

Seren Roberts
Date: 2/26/2013 3:20:00 PM

Thanks Mandy.....

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/26/2013 9:31:00 AM

Thanks for sharing your thoughts, congrad's Light & Love

Seren Roberts
Date: 2/26/2013 3:20:00 PM

Thanking you Debbie

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 2/26/2013 3:52:00 AM

Congrats on your win. Powerful Monoku. Connie

Seren Roberts
Date: 2/26/2013 3:21:00 PM

Hi Connie thanks

Tahera Mannan

Date: 2/25/2013 11:01:00 PM

Many congrats Seren for this well deserved win

Seren Roberts
Date: 2/26/2013 1:59:00 AM

Thank you Tahera both for the comment and for stopping by .....Seren

Ray Dillard

Date: 2/25/2013 9:30:00 PM

Super nice Seren! Congratulations on your win. Yes, a gun is just a tool, but some people will never master their proper use. RAY

Seren Roberts
Date: 2/25/2013 9:38:00 PM

One day maybe Ray..Seren

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/25/2013 8:59:00 PM

Seren, Congratulations with your winning poem in Rix's "A "Gun"-o-ku " contest. Goodnight~ LINDA

Seren Roberts
Date: 2/25/2013 9:37:00 PM

Thanks Linda .. Seren

Gwendolen Song

Date: 2/25/2013 7:48:00 PM

Seren,,,such a loaded monoku if there ever was one! Nice work on this entry...u expressed the emotion that I was looking for so very well! I was interested to read what other poets tho't of this one! :) gwendolen

Seren Roberts
Date: 2/25/2013 8:19:00 PM

thanks Gwendolen ...Seren

Kanour Med

Date: 2/20/2013 4:38:00 AM

Ah yeah this is right

Seren Roberts
Date: 2/20/2013 5:39:00 AM

thanks for stopping by...Seren

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 1/17/2013 3:01:00 AM

yes true, it's not the gun but the trigger so right .............xx

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/18/2013 5:05:00 PM

yes Mandy thats right

The Situation

Date: 1/16/2013 6:28:00 PM

tell that to the kid that shot his brother.

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/17/2013 12:46:00 AM

Dont know what to say, wouldnt know what to say...Seren

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/16/2013 6:54:00 AM

and sadly Seren with that word that rhymes with thrill "Kill " a good poem is this... gives the mind the urge to think...

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/17/2013 2:20:00 AM

not the gun that kills Harry its the finger that pulls the trigger

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/16/2013 10:29:00 AM

Yes I wrote it as kill but then altered it to thrill