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A spec, lazily floating upon : “ The Gulf Blue Water “ And then there were two specs, entwined together Spot Black hole, in the Beauty of “ The Gulf Blue Water “ A spec to a SPOT ( it even sounds so much Stronger ) When two Spots meet : Meld : Creating an “ Epic Drop “ Yet to the East, West, South, North Thousands of Drops Mixing and matching; Defiling “ The Gulf Blue Water “ Let’s flash : To the future of the shore: Where Oysters Dance As the alarm of “ Destruction” sounds off in “ Lazy Blue Waters To the land and marshes : Prepare for Doom : from the “ Black Gulf Waters “ A Tsunami of Hell’s Fury Designed by Mankind’s “ Ignorance of Nature “ Who’s here to help us “ Marshland Security “ ASPCA “, The Government?? Inspired by " Team POETRYSOUP'S Contest "Gulf Oil Spill"

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Date: 9/25/2011 12:37:00 AM
Hi! H.G., okay you gave me many poems to follow... Which i'm searching for right now... before i go to bed,... First i want to thank you for your lovely mail again. Than for the inspiration, that i should stay here on the soup longer... Thank you.... A great poem, for them GULF BLUE Waters... i live near them shores. Especially when all that chaos was going around... Thank you for sharing,..p.d.
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Date: 6/15/2010 1:04:00 PM
I think that the way that you have done this one deserves much praise...Great idea and great form..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara..Good luck in the contest...
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Date: 6/14/2010 5:12:00 PM
I really like the shift from "gulf blue water" to "black fulf waters," a great device to create a stark contrast. I enjoyed this upload, thanks, Gavin.
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Date: 6/14/2010 4:08:00 PM
We can get a man to the moon, make chips that carry a billions of dots of info. etc...etc....but we cant figure this oil spill out? Beautiful work HG. Th Russians have solved a very similar problem with a small atomic bomb. We need to think about this..I am beyound worried that this is going to change our planet forever. Write to me. BG
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