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Guiding Light

A shaft of light gleams, Through the murky illusions: Rocky coast divulged. A mariners guide, Through the treacherous coastline: A symbol of home. ______________________ *In the Light of Haiku * -Raul Moreno

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/13/2011 11:49:00 AM

CONGRATS RAUL ON A SUPER SECOND PLACE WIN FOR THIS RARE BEAUTY POETRY LUV..

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 9/12/2011 6:31:00 PM

SO good to see you at the top...glad yur on the soup again. congrats. BG

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/12/2011 4:34:00 PM

Sincere congratulations, Raul...., and thank you again for your thoughtful, and helpful suggestions. I'm very grateful and appreciative. :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/12/2011 4:19:00 PM

Beautifully written, Raul. Congratulations on your well-deserved win in Russell's contest! Love, Carolyn

David Williams

Date: 9/12/2011 3:59:00 PM

hey Raul congrats on your win..David

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/12/2011 3:29:00 PM

Congratulations on your 2nd Place win in Russell's "In the Light of Haiku"contest Raul. Love,Carol

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/12/2011 3:01:00 PM

Congrats on your 2nd place win in my contest "In the Light of Haiku"!!

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/10/2011 11:09:00 AM

these are excellent paul, good luck in the contest. harry