Raul Moreno Poet Haiku

Guiding Light

A shaft of light gleams,
Through the murky illusions:
Rocky coast divulged. 

A mariners guide,
Through the treacherous coastline:
A symbol of home. 



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*In the Light of Haiku *

-Raul Moreno

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 13, 2011 at 11:49 AM CONGRATS RAUL ON A SUPER SECOND PLACE WIN FOR THIS RARE BEAUTY POETRY LUV..

Barbara Gorelick September 12, 2011 at 6:31 PM SO good to see you at the top...glad yur on the soup again. congrats. BG

Carrie Richards September 12, 2011 at 4:34 PM Sincere congratulations, Raul...., and thank you again for your thoughtful, and helpful suggestions. I'm very grateful and appreciative. :)

Carolyn Devonshire September 12, 2011 at 4:19 PM Beautifully written, Raul. Congratulations on your well-deserved win in Russell's contest! Love, Carolyn

David Williams September 12, 2011 at 3:59 PM hey Raul congrats on your win..David

Carol Sunshine Brown September 12, 2011 at 3:29 PM Congratulations on your 2nd Place win in Russell's "In the Light of Haiku"contest Raul. Love,Carol

Russell Sivey September 12, 2011 at 3:01 PM Congrats on your 2nd place win in my contest "In the Light of Haiku"!!

Harry Horsman September 10, 2011 at 11:09 AM these are excellent paul, good luck in the contest. harry