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Guess What ? I Have Internet !

I am a mouse and I can hide most anywhere behind your walls I sleep and snore like a little squiggly tot without a care I am a mouse and I don't care who knows it I am a mouse who loves to nest and burrow inside a cluttered house quite often ignored like the fluffy dust settled beneath your table I am a mouse with a passion for cables I am a mouse with a slightly pointed nose often I avoid your traps and poisoned bait eating most anything you leave behind I am a mouse and I live like a Sovereign King inside your basement, behind the cabinet, I found an old cel phone and guess what?... I got internet !

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Date: 7/21/2024 9:49:00 PM
Humorous write dear poet friend. 'I am a mouse with a slightly pointed nose' yet avoiding the human tricks of deceptions. Congratulations. Happy writing.
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Date: 7/21/2024 9:01:00 PM
Great poem Mystic Rose - I'm a mouse and I don't care who knows it!
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Date: 7/21/2024 8:15:00 PM
Congratulations for your win. Enjoy :)
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Date: 7/20/2024 8:55:00 PM
Congrats on 4th place out of 35 entries in my contest! I know, Mystic Rose, you are no stranger to winning in my contests so I obviously enjoy your approach. The internet at the end was hilarious and such great social commentary where even a mouse's highest priority is gaining internet access. Hitting on big comedy as well as poetry points. You can almost see it as New Yorker comic strip.
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Date: 6/19/2024 7:04:00 PM
Somehow we survived a wolrd without the internet, although I don't know how. I saw a funny quote the other day, it read, "Respect your parents they graduated without google" I enjoyed your poem's double entendre, it was so clever and fun to read, Mystic
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Date: 6/18/2024 10:38:00 AM
Nice poem. Who needs internet?
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Date: 6/18/2024 3:45:00 PM
I can certainly do without for great lengths of time lol but do need it, :)
Date: 6/18/2024 7:22:00 AM
A very clever poem. Can we survive without the internet? Loved your poem.
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Date: 6/18/2024 3:45:00 PM
Not totally Victor but only we can decide how much is enough for us :)
Date: 6/18/2024 6:46:00 AM
This is very cute. Well done :)
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Date: 6/18/2024 3:45:00 PM
Thanks Heidi
Date: 6/18/2024 12:26:00 AM
Perfect! Without internet, i wonder what would be the world like. Sweet rose your take on this is so clever and witty too! Made me smile! Soul warming to read this fun and poetic write. Best wishes for the contest. Sending you light
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Date: 6/18/2024 3:22:00 AM
without internet the world would be more human and less A I reliant, we'd talk to each other and mirror each other's souls, and live as one. Now wouldn't that be nice. Sharing the light with you dear Ink Queen of Site :)
Date: 6/17/2024 5:09:00 PM
Yeah? Let's see if you can outrun my broom pipsqueak. And your tiny pc is toast
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Date: 6/17/2024 6:32:00 PM
lol try and catch me if you can !

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