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Guaranteed Feel Good - You'd Bait'cha Believe It

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For OP ED contest ---

Bad poetry, so bad it's good. A little source of joy. Whatchagonnado? Embrace it, that's what. I saw streetlights Remembered that song by Journey Not all journeys start with a step Some are people One hand clapping Is that my poetry? Keep scrolling, feel good about yourself. Consider it a gift.

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Suzette Richards

Date: 1/14/2024 1:15:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in my contest, DD. The poem you included was rather unexpected in this piece of mainly prose. Your final line is superb.

Suzette Richards
Date: 1/14/2024 4:17:00 AM

Di11y Da11y
Date: 1/14/2024 1:21:00 AM

Thanks Suzette, I was indeed in a chance taking mood with this one. I tried to conjure the essence of click bait but without leaving the ill will of truly wasted time. Glad the 'creative' tabloidesque elements didn't faze you :)

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 12/21/2023 7:39:00 PM

Thank you for this feel good poem.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 12/22/2023 1:37:00 PM

It's fun to read some terrible poetry and wants to be better - uplifting :)

John Lawless

Date: 12/21/2023 6:10:00 AM

a, the old mystery of "what is the sound of one hand clapping?" As long as they're not smacking somebody then the mystery continues

Di11y Da11y
Date: 12/21/2023 2:15:00 PM

I'm glad you found something to ponder haha :) thanks for stopping by