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Guanica

You slept in, I walked to the beach “I love you” an old American hippy yelled ”And the mosquitos do too!” My big red welts A souvenir of our night in Guanica A stay forced by the Puerto Rican cop Who pulled you over for “speeding” at 5pm License to be returned when you paid the fine Payable only at the police station, which closed at 5pm You weren’t speeding But you were Nuyorican Without a word of Spanish He would have locked you up if he could The hotel he said was nearest (perhaps owned by his dearest?) Had a pool, empty save for cracks and a coconut We were the only guests Yet we were underdressed For the bar Two local grand dames and an old colonel In full regalia From another time Sipping their nightly resurrection When I stepped naked into the bathroom And switched on the light A hundred mosquitos fed in a frenzy as if they’d waited all their lives for me The old hotel was the highlight Of our trip And of our time together You could never want me The way those mosquitos did

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Date: 3/3/2022 9:49:00 AM
Wherever you went, Sharon, you should come back. These are wonderful!
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Date: 9/2/2020 7:37:00 PM
You could never want me The way those mosquitos did Great!
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Sharon Keely
Date: 9/3/2020 9:53:00 AM
Thanks Douglas!
Date: 8/28/2020 1:11:00 PM
"A hundred mosquitos fed in a frenzy as if they’d waited all their lives for me" OUCH! Lovely imagery!
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Sharon Keely
Date: 8/28/2020 2:10:00 PM
Thanks Caren!
Date: 8/27/2020 2:12:00 PM
Your poems e-mailed to me are so true, yet, written lightheartedly and with humor. They are amusing.
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Sharon Keely
Date: 8/28/2020 7:00:00 AM
Thank you Marilene.
Date: 8/23/2020 1:23:00 PM
An excellent piece Sharon that oozed atmosphere and pulled me in right from the start. Cheers - Gary
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Sharon Keely
Date: 8/23/2020 7:07:00 PM
Thanks Gary!
Date: 8/23/2020 3:31:00 AM
Wow and welcome to poetry soup. I will write more of your muse. Kind wishes, Kai
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Sharon Keely
Date: 8/23/2020 7:06:00 PM
Many thanks Kai, and happiness to you.
Date: 8/22/2020 9:05:00 PM
That you are able to write about this in a relatively light-hearted manner, even today, is amazing to me -- a real credit to you, Sharon. I don't think I could ever be so gracious to those #$%^&*&^% mosquitoes! ~ Pesticides for Pests! :) gw
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Sharon Keely
Date: 8/23/2020 7:10:00 PM
Great photo for you in the Washington Post, 8.21.20, story titled: Scientists fight disease-carrying mosquitoes by letting them feed off their blood
Date: 8/21/2020 12:50:00 PM
That mosquito frenzy was a fantastic tale...all the way to the end. <3
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Sharon Keely
Date: 8/22/2020 7:32:00 AM
Thanks Kim!
Date: 8/21/2020 10:43:00 AM
Excellent imagery, Sharon.
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Sharon Keely
Date: 8/22/2020 7:32:00 AM
Thanks Franci!
Date: 8/21/2020 8:25:00 AM
This is a excellent write... great imagery. Enjoyed the trip with you and never imagined writing about these blood sucking insects :) Great writing :)
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Sharon Keely
Date: 8/22/2020 7:32:00 AM
And they've stuck with me all these years! Thanks Regina.

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