Guanica

You slept in, I walked to the beach
“I love you” an old American hippy yelled
”And the mosquitos do too!”

My big red welts
A souvenir of our night in Guanica
A stay forced by the Puerto Rican cop
Who pulled you over for “speeding” at 5pm
License to be returned when you paid the fine
Payable only at the police station, which closed at 5pm

You weren’t speeding
But you were Nuyorican
Without a word of Spanish
He would have locked you up if he could

The hotel he said was nearest
(perhaps owned by his dearest?)
Had a pool, empty save for cracks and a coconut

We were the only guests
Yet we were underdressed 
For the bar
Two local grand dames and an old colonel
In full regalia
From another time
Sipping their nightly resurrection

When I stepped naked into the bathroom
And switched on the light
A hundred mosquitos fed in a frenzy 
as if they’d waited all their lives 
for me

The old hotel was the highlight
Of our trip
And of our time together 
You could never want me
The way those mosquitos did
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Kyser Avatar
March 3, 2022 at 9:49 AM
Wherever you went, Sharon, you should come back. These are wonderful!
Brown Avatar
September 2, 2020 at 7:37 PM
You could never want me The way those mosquitos did Great!
Keely Avatar
September 3, 2020 at 9:53 AM
Thanks Douglas!
Krutsinger Avatar
August 28, 2020 at 1:11 PM
"A hundred mosquitos fed in a frenzy as if they’d waited all their lives for me" OUCH! Lovely imagery!
Keely Avatar
August 28, 2020 at 2:10 PM
Thanks Caren!
Evans Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 2:12 PM
Your poems e-mailed to me are so true, yet, written lightheartedly and with humor. They are amusing.
Keely Avatar
August 28, 2020 at 7:00 AM
Thank you Marilene.
Radice Avatar
August 23, 2020 at 1:23 PM
An excellent piece Sharon that oozed atmosphere and pulled me in right from the start. Cheers - Gary
Keely Avatar
August 23, 2020 at 7:07 PM
Thanks Gary!
Neumann Avatar
August 23, 2020 at 3:31 AM
Wow and welcome to poetry soup. I will write more of your muse. Kind wishes, Kai
Keely Avatar
August 23, 2020 at 7:06 PM
Many thanks Kai, and happiness to you.
Wolf Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 9:05 PM
That you are able to write about this in a relatively light-hearted manner, even today, is amazing to me -- a real credit to you, Sharon. I don't think I could ever be so gracious to those #$%^&*&^% mosquitoes! ~ Pesticides for Pests! :) gw
Keely Avatar
August 23, 2020 at 7:10 PM
Great photo for you in the Washington Post, 8.21.20, story titled: Scientists fight disease-carrying mosquitoes by letting them feed off their blood
Rodrigues Avatar
August 21, 2020 at 12:50 PM
That mosquito frenzy was a fantastic tale...all the way to the end. <3
Keely Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 7:32 AM
Thanks Kim!
Hoffman Avatar
August 21, 2020 at 10:43 AM
Excellent imagery, Sharon.
Keely Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 7:32 AM
Thanks Franci!
Mcintosh Avatar
August 21, 2020 at 8:25 AM
This is a excellent write... great imagery. Enjoyed the trip with you and never imagined writing about these blood sucking insects :) Great writing :)
Keely Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 7:32 AM
And they've stuck with me all these years! Thanks Regina.
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