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Growing Up

I don't want to grow up, Not today. The thought of tomorrow, Just eats me away. Responsibilities are hovering up, Like any fire in the forest. My mind has been acting just like a mess, And I can't make myself at rest. Is this the life, Which would continue further? Cause I don't want to grieve, Any after. Guess, I would have to, Learn to clean up my mess. Straighten up a little, And think for the best. There are many wonders, Left undiscovered, The doors are closed, Waiting to be rediscovered. Life is hard, Truly. But what's the fun, In easy? 13/9/2022

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Stephan McBride

Date: 12/11/2022 10:24:00 AM

Great write for many your age and older ,I use to could not wait to get old now being older I am like what was I thinking, and this new generation of kids have the world introduced to them at the fingertips at such a young age . They are learning how bad this world is younger and younger, writing helps one understand and seek our surroundings for strength, with God dwelling within that peace and joy will remain as a precious child, love ya take care

Komal Walimbe
Date: 12/11/2022 10:24:00 PM

I agree with you! These responsibilities keep increasing everyday, I guess we will just have to deal with it...Thank you so much for visiting my page today!

Paul Callus

Date: 10/23/2022 10:58:00 AM

Hi Komal :) I've heard say that life is a rollercoaster, with lots of ups and downs, but for a young person like you I suggest that you enjoy the ride and deal with any hurdles when they arise. As your poem ending states, there is no fun in easy! ~ Best regards // paul

Komal Walimbe
Date: 10/26/2022 5:27:00 AM

Hey Paul! So glad you visited my page...Thank you so much for your regards. And yeah i agree with your thoughts all around life is a rollercoaster... Have a great day!:)

Michael Tor

Date: 9/26/2022 5:11:00 PM

Hang in there young lady. It get easier as you go along. Got bless you for sharing...

Komal Walimbe
Date: 9/27/2022 4:18:00 AM

Thank you for visiting my page, yes hopefully it works that way. I guess teenage is just a stage of mix feelings and a building block of the future. Have a great day!:)

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 9/19/2022 11:31:00 AM

I enjoyed your poem, Komal. Especially the final verse. Life is full of adventure, and adventure can be exhilarating. Have a wonderful day, Evelyn :)

Komal Walimbe
Date: 9/20/2022 2:11:00 AM

Glad you liked it! And I totally agree with you on life being an adventure... Have a great day!:)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/19/2022 7:36:00 AM

Life has its ups and down, sometimes hard, sometimes easy.

Komal Walimbe
Date: 9/20/2022 2:10:00 AM

Yes! agreed victor...Thank you for commenting on my poem!:)

Bill Baker

Date: 9/17/2022 5:36:00 PM

You got it right, Komal. But what's the fun, In easy? Life is an adventure! Go for it! I enjoyed your poem today my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Komal Walimbe
Date: 9/18/2022 5:17:00 AM

Thank you Bill for commenting on my poem. You are always welcome here...glad you liked it! Have a great day :)