Elaine George Poet Acrostic

Grief

G  ut wrenching sobs
R  ip you apart
I  ntense pain squeezes your heart
E  ntrenched in the gloom where only death blooms
F elled by the tune from the Grim Reapers harp

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Written:  Feb. 10, 2006
My first attempt of an Acrostic

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Sara Kendrick December 18, 2021 at 4:09 AM You did a good job on this form and the topic. I still think about my parents after all these years (25). I need to go back to the cemetery to check on the graves to see if they are being well kept. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara Elaine George December 20, 2021 at 4:52 PM Thank you for stopping by and for your comments, dear Sara.

Andrea Dietrich February 25, 2011 at 11:08 AM great job at your first acrostic.You kept it short and illustrated your point descriptively!

Abe Lopez May 17, 2009 at 2:00 PM Elaine, congrats on being featured this week!

Raul Moreno May 16, 2009 at 1:49 PM Elaine, nice acrostic and congrats on being featured this week...Raul

Phyllis Babcock May 16, 2009 at 9:02 AM So true Laine. Congrats on your featured write. God Bless Phyl

Brandee Augustus May 12, 2009 at 1:41 PM Love it, love it, love it! I feel a lot less alone when I can find another poet who knows how to be creative through acrostics. Well done!

Laura Mckenzie May 12, 2009 at 11:50 AM Congratulations on your wonderful featured poem! Well done! Laura :)

Carol Sunshine Brown May 12, 2009 at 4:58 AM Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Lainie. Grief could not be explained any better then with the words you have written. Love, Carol

Diane Christian May 12, 2009 at 2:48 AM well done on your featured poem great work, God bless from diane

May 11, 2009 at 5:36 PM So much truth in your words. Good use of the acrostic form. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep up the good writing my friend. Wishing you continued success. Karen

Sharon Winter May 11, 2009 at 10:35 AM Congrats Lainie on your excellent featured write of the week! You captured grief alright. Love, Shar

Daver Austin May 11, 2009 at 8:24 AM Hey, Elaine, you got to me with this one! Good grief, what a fine write. Congrats. Love, daver

Vince Suzadail Jr. May 11, 2009 at 8:07 AM Congrats Lainie on your acrostic "Grief" being featured. God Bless. Vince

James Peranteau May 11, 2009 at 5:53 AM Elaine,...this acrostic is well done and great! Congrats having it featured this week,...many more to you ! james

Brian Strand May 11, 2009 at 12:43 AM Congrats on your featured poem this week Elaine .Rgds Brian

Ernilando Tugaff May 10, 2009 at 10:38 PM Brief, short, concise, nice. I love it. Congratulations my firend on your featured write. Ernilando