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Grief

G ut wrenching sobs R ip you apart I ntense pain squeezes your heart E ntrenched in the gloom where only death blooms F elled by the tune from the Grim Reapers harp . ~~~~~ Written: Feb. 10, 2006 My first attempt of an Acrostic

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Date: 12/18/2021 4:09:00 AM
You did a good job on this form and the topic. I still think about my parents after all these years (25). I need to go back to the cemetery to check on the graves to see if they are being well kept. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 12/20/2021 4:52:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by and for your comments, dear Sara.
Date: 2/25/2011 11:08:00 AM
great job at your first acrostic.You kept it short and illustrated your point descriptively!
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Date: 5/17/2009 2:00:00 PM
Elaine, congrats on being featured this week!
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Date: 5/16/2009 1:49:00 PM
Elaine, nice acrostic and congrats on being featured this week...Raul
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Date: 5/16/2009 9:02:00 AM
So true Laine. Congrats on your featured write. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 5/12/2009 1:41:00 PM
Love it, love it, love it! I feel a lot less alone when I can find another poet who knows how to be creative through acrostics. Well done!
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Date: 5/12/2009 11:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful featured poem! Well done! Laura :)
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Date: 5/12/2009 4:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Lainie. Grief could not be explained any better then with the words you have written. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/12/2009 2:48:00 AM
well done on your featured poem great work, God bless from diane
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Date: 5/11/2009 5:36:00 PM
So much truth in your words. Good use of the acrostic form. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep up the good writing my friend. Wishing you continued success. Karen
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Date: 5/11/2009 10:35:00 AM
Congrats Lainie on your excellent featured write of the week! You captured grief alright. Love, Shar
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Date: 5/11/2009 8:24:00 AM
Hey, Elaine, you got to me with this one! Good grief, what a fine write. Congrats. Love, daver
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Date: 5/11/2009 8:07:00 AM
Congrats Lainie on your acrostic "Grief" being featured. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 5/11/2009 5:53:00 AM
Elaine,...this acrostic is well done and great! Congrats having it featured this week,...many more to you ! james
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Date: 5/11/2009 12:43:00 AM
Congrats on your featured poem this week Elaine .Rgds Brian
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Date: 5/10/2009 10:38:00 PM
Brief, short, concise, nice. I love it. Congratulations my firend on your featured write. Ernilando
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