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Grey Wind

Low and heavy Fierce and bone chilling Swaying against the skies silhoutte Grey wind into the breath Life remains Trembling Fur parka around the face Masked, unrecognisable Chilled and stiff Frost bit nose

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Virginia Mitchell

Date: 1/26/2010 3:47:00 AM

Well done! I can feel the cold :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/25/2010 7:30:00 PM

Brrrrr ... could feel that Grey Wind in your lines so descriptive... we have five inches of rain today.. a new record... need me a boat to navigate this week... brrrrrrr... luv.. Linda-Marie.. thankxxx for always commenting so specially on my poetry..

Daver Austin

Date: 1/25/2010 7:31:00 AM

Yep! Sounds like Michigan alright. Wherever you live you must be having experience...the piece is truly "bone chilling!" Love, daver

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/25/2010 4:16:00 AM

You have accentuated the winter cold in this one to the degree that I will have to go and get some hot cocoa. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Mom

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/24/2010 3:28:00 PM

Very "chilling" description of life in the North, Doris. But I'd trade a sunburn for a little "frost bit nose" anyday. Your descriptions are very vivid. Enjoyed hearing about life in your area during winter. Love, Carolyn

Constance La France

Date: 1/24/2010 2:36:00 PM

Makes me have a chill... even Canada is not that cold today.. burrrr.. great writing...

Pamela Griffiths

Date: 1/24/2010 2:00:00 PM

Hi Doriis, nice poem, thanks for asking about me I have been busy with work and recently was involved in an accident I'm ok, but it has shaken me up. I hope to write again soon. Love Pam x

Daniel Cheeseman

Date: 1/24/2010 1:52:00 PM

Sounds bad there doris get in front of the fire with a nice cuppa, thanks for the support your an angel Daniel