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GREY CLOUDS



grey clouds hang lifeless
hovering in dark silence -
spring bloom hesitates



Date written:  March 15, 2019

Contest:  Writing Challenge 2, March 2019 - Haiku

Sponsor:  Dear Heart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 3/18/2019 11:10:00 AM
Line, congratulations on your win in my contest with this fine haiku ~
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Date: 3/17/2019 7:52:00 PM
I can picture this gray scene. Good haiku, Line. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 3/17/2019 8:41:00 PM
Thanks, Sandra. Most appreciated.
Date: 3/17/2019 7:21:00 PM
We certainly have those grey clouds at the moment Line, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/17/2019 8:41:00 PM
Thanks, Jan. Much appreciated.
Date: 3/17/2019 6:59:00 PM
Great Haiku, Line, congratulations on your win. Happy Saint Patrick’s Day. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 3/17/2019 8:42:00 PM
Thanks, Eve, for your lovely visit and compliment.
Date: 3/17/2019 6:38:00 PM
this is really good, Line. i love that twist at the end. Congrats.
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Date: 3/17/2019 6:44:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea. Most appreciated.
Date: 3/17/2019 5:27:00 PM
Lovely! Heartiest congratulations on your win, Line!:-)
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Date: 3/17/2019 6:44:00 PM
Thanks, Edward. Much appreciated.
Date: 3/17/2019 3:19:00 PM
- Congratulations, Line :)
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Date: 3/17/2019 6:45:00 PM
Thanks or your visit and comment, Sunshine.
Date: 3/16/2019 2:00:00 PM
Don't hesitate! Come on out and bloom -- the rain will refresh you. Enjoyed your delightful haiku, Line! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 3/16/2019 8:49:00 PM
For sure !! Let spring bloom for heaven's sake.
Date: 3/15/2019 1:56:00 PM
- Great written in the moment, Line :) - Luck in the contest - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/15/2019 2:13:00 PM
Thanks, Sunshine. Always appreciate your visits because God knows it's gloomy outdoors these days.
Date: 3/15/2019 1:39:00 PM
Lovely haiku Line, exactly what we have at the moment, menacing grey clouds. Good luck. Tom.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/15/2019 2:14:00 PM
Thank you so much, Tom. Dare we hope for the sun to show itself in the near future!
Date: 3/15/2019 1:10:00 PM
Like the soft suspense in this!
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Date: 3/15/2019 2:14:00 PM
Thank you, Michelle. Much appreciated.