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Grey Clouds

grey clouds lifeless hovering in silence - spring bloom hesitates Submitted on March 15, 2019 for contest WRITING CHALLENGE 2, MARCH 2019 HAIKU sponsored by DEAR HEART

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Constance La France

Date: 3/18/2019 11:10:00 AM

Line, congratulations on your win in my contest with this fine haiku ~

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 3/17/2019 7:52:00 PM

I can picture this gray scene. Good haiku, Line. Congratulations on your win!

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/17/2019 8:41:00 PM

Thanks, Sandra. Most appreciated.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/17/2019 7:21:00 PM

We certainly have those grey clouds at the moment Line, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/17/2019 8:41:00 PM

Thanks, Jan. Much appreciated.

Eve Roper

Date: 3/17/2019 6:59:00 PM

Great Haiku, Line, congratulations on your win. Happy Saint Patrick’s Day. Hugs Eve ~`*

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/17/2019 8:42:00 PM

Thanks, Eve, for your lovely visit and compliment.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/17/2019 6:38:00 PM

this is really good, Line. i love that twist at the end. Congrats.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/17/2019 6:44:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea. Most appreciated.

Edward Ibeh

Date: 3/17/2019 5:27:00 PM

Lovely! Heartiest congratulations on your win, Line!:-)

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/17/2019 6:44:00 PM

Thanks, Edward. Much appreciated.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/17/2019 3:19:00 PM

- Congratulations, Line :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/17/2019 6:45:00 PM

Thanks or your visit and comment, Sunshine.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/16/2019 2:00:00 PM

Don't hesitate! Come on out and bloom -- the rain will refresh you. Enjoyed your delightful haiku, Line! Hugs, Carolyn

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/16/2019 8:49:00 PM

For sure !! Let spring bloom for heaven's sake.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/15/2019 1:56:00 PM

- Great written in the moment, Line :) - Luck in the contest - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/15/2019 2:13:00 PM

Thanks, Sunshine. Always appreciate your visits because God knows it's gloomy outdoors these days.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/15/2019 1:39:00 PM

Lovely haiku Line, exactly what we have at the moment, menacing grey clouds. Good luck. Tom.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/15/2019 2:14:00 PM

Thank you so much, Tom. Dare we hope for the sun to show itself in the near future!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 3/15/2019 1:10:00 PM

Like the soft suspense in this!

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/15/2019 2:14:00 PM

Thank you, Michelle. Much appreciated.