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Grey Clouds

grey clouds lifeless hovering in silence - spring bloom hesitates Submitted on March 15, 2019 for contest WRITING CHALLENGE 2, MARCH 2019 HAIKU sponsored by DEAR HEART

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Constance La France
Date: 3/18/2019 11:10:00 AM
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Line, congratulations on your win in my contest with this fine haiku ~
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Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 3/17/2019 7:52:00 PM
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I can picture this gray scene. Good haiku, Line. Congratulations on your win!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/17/2019 8:41:00 PM
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Thanks, Sandra. Most appreciated.
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/17/2019 7:21:00 PM
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We certainly have those grey clouds at the moment Line, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/17/2019 8:41:00 PM
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Thanks, Jan. Much appreciated.
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/17/2019 6:59:00 PM
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Great Haiku, Line, congratulations on your win. Happy Saint Patrick’s Day. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/17/2019 8:42:00 PM
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Thanks, Eve, for your lovely visit and compliment.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/17/2019 6:38:00 PM
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this is really good, Line. i love that twist at the end. Congrats.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/17/2019 6:44:00 PM
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Thanks, Andrea. Most appreciated.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/17/2019 5:27:00 PM
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Lovely! Heartiest congratulations on your win, Line!:-)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/17/2019 6:44:00 PM
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Thanks, Edward. Much appreciated.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/17/2019 3:19:00 PM
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- Congratulations, Line :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/17/2019 6:45:00 PM
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Thanks or your visit and comment, Sunshine.
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 3/16/2019 2:00:00 PM
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Don't hesitate! Come on out and bloom -- the rain will refresh you. Enjoyed your delightful haiku, Line! Hugs, Carolyn
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/16/2019 8:49:00 PM
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For sure !! Let spring bloom for heaven's sake.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/15/2019 1:56:00 PM
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- Great written in the moment, Line :) - Luck in the contest - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/15/2019 2:13:00 PM
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Thanks, Sunshine. Always appreciate your visits because God knows it's gloomy outdoors these days.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/15/2019 1:39:00 PM
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Lovely haiku Line, exactly what we have at the moment, menacing grey clouds. Good luck. Tom.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/15/2019 2:14:00 PM
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Thank you so much, Tom. Dare we hope for the sun to show itself in the near future!
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/15/2019 1:10:00 PM
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Like the soft suspense in this!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/15/2019 2:14:00 PM
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Thank you, Michelle. Much appreciated.

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