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Where are the golden years I've heard about, those worry-free years, I looked forward to? Now when friends call, they practically shout, and actors I knew are down to a few. I'm greeting people at a Walmart store, what image of retirement includes this? Prices are high; I can't afford much more, and yet, hunger's a pain hard to dismiss. I feel let down; there's no pension, no hope, I'll continue till I drop dead at work. What choice do I have? I can barely cope, it's either go to work or go berserk. Growing old is such a slow way to die, every so often, I breakdown and cry. (Sonnet) 10/7/2018

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Date: 11/12/2018 1:20:00 PM
Hello Emile,I just finished reading your poem, I also shed some tears, because this poem is so very sad. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 11/12/2018 2:56:00 PM
Thank you Darlene, I appreciate your kind remarks my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/16/2018 5:58:00 AM
So sad that this is very true for many seniors. Strong message, Emile.
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Date: 10/16/2018 6:44:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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