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Green Spring Nature Poem

Amazing caramel, orange rose red sunset
Blazing behind the horizon as it
Comes forth with the absence of glittering stars
Dawn brings out the sight of white clouds and blue skies
Enlightening nature to wake with a
Fresh new day with the sound of the birds chirping and singing
Gathering food and feeding their young nestled in the nest between limbs and leaves of the
Huge old majestic oak as the leaves rustle and sway in the breeze
It sings the blessed song of peace and
Joy of the arriving of green spring
Keeping shadows of cool shade underneath its huge canopy
Leaving the living with a small place of undisturbed haven of rest among the tall grass
Mist that swirls with fresh intoxicating air
Nutrients to the soil brings a rich harvest of green fields with
Of course crickets, beetles, weevils, and critters with
Plenty of food for them to eat
Quiet of the night brings the cool gentle wind that  sends crops
Rippling in the breeze
Sending  and spreading  seeds
To the yonder fields
Under the dark clouds of the
Vanishing moon
With wetness in the air from a nearby stream bringing early morning bumblebees
Xenogamy of
Yellow pollen traveling along a
Zigzagging path

© 8/1/2015

Contest Name: Nature Poems Only
Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton



 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/13/2015 8:19:00 PM
Eve.. You wrote a picture perfect nature poem for Shadow's great outdoors contest. Congrats on your placement.. Your work is a winner!
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Date: 8/5/2015 5:48:00 PM
Unique approach using this form to tell the story. Congratulations on your win, Eve. Cheers, SuZ
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Date: 8/5/2015 8:48:00 AM
Perfect nature poem indeed…Way to go with this win..Congrats!!Sara
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/5/2015 11:41:00 AM
Thank you, Sara, for your constant support, kind words, and your congratulations :~) Hugs sweet friend
Date: 8/5/2015 8:37:00 AM
An ABC (did I spell that right) poem! Abecedarian, a form I'm very reluctant to try. Beautifully done, Eve. I impressed.
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Date: 8/5/2015 11:42:00 AM
Thank you, James, for your support and your congratulations :~) Hugs sweet friend
Date: 8/4/2015 10:24:00 PM
Beauty of nature so well penned Eve ! Congrats on first place win!
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/5/2015 11:46:00 AM
Thank you, Dr. Upma A. Sharma , for your support and your congratulations :~) Hugs sweet friend
Date: 8/4/2015 9:42:00 PM
Eve, Congratulations on your win..... SKAT
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/5/2015 11:46:00 AM
Thank you, Skat, for your congratulations :~) Hugs sweet friend
Date: 8/4/2015 8:03:00 PM
your abecedarian is wonderful and you included all of the words provided. congratulations on your high score.
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Date: 8/5/2015 11:44:00 AM
Thank you, Joyce, for your support and congratulations :~) Hugs sweet friend
Date: 8/4/2015 5:18:00 PM
great poem Eve congrats on 1st place hugs 7
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/4/2015 7:19:00 PM
Thank you, Shadow, I am so honored to place a very big :) Hugs Eve
Date: 8/4/2015 5:02:00 PM
You did pretty good here, Eve. Very nice. Congrats.
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/5/2015 11:44:00 AM
Thank you, Abdul, for your support and congratulations :~) Hugs Eve
Date: 8/4/2015 4:13:00 PM
oh clever clever you Eve I know Shadow enjoys this form - you wove the 2 elements together so cleverly - my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 8/5/2015 12:06:00 PM
yes the x definitely is a challenge! hugs jan xx
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/5/2015 11:43:00 AM
Thank you, Jan, for your constant support and your congratulations :~) I really enjoy working with this form the "X" is a challange. Hugs sweet friend
Date: 8/1/2015 10:11:00 AM
What a beauty Eve...one of your best pieces...a fav...Tim
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/1/2015 10:20:00 AM
Thank you, Tim, that means the world to me. Hugs Eve
Date: 8/1/2015 9:26:00 AM
Hi, Eve, loved your nature poem of early morning as the new day begins. Great for contest. Well written, a 7. ~~Darlene
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/1/2015 10:21:00 AM
Thank you, Darlene, for your support and complilment. Hugs Eve