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The Ribbon

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I stand on a high cliff my raven hair is blowing in the wild wind a green ribbon from my hair is sailing away over the ocean wish I could sail away too like my green ribbon drifting now over the blue like a bird ___________________________ March 25, 2019 Poetry/Free Verse/The Ribbon Copyright Protected, ID 19- 1127-364-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Ribbon Poetry sponsor, Line Gauthier Third Place

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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/3/2019 6:16:00 PM
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hello Dear Heart, I like the way you described the green ribbon driffting into the sky freely. have a nice evening my friend.
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Constance La France
Date: 4/5/2019 4:50:00 PM
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Darlene, thank you so much for your comment ~
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/1/2019 5:00:00 AM
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- Congratulations on your great 3rd place, D.H. ... beautiful written and shape :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Constance La France
Date: 4/1/2019 8:57:00 AM
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Sunshine, thanks for the congratulations and the compliment ~
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/25/2019 9:10:00 PM
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Beautiful response to the prompt, my friend.
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Constance La France
Date: 4/1/2019 8:57:00 AM
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Caren, thanks for the beautiful ~
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Mahtab Bangalee
Date: 3/25/2019 1:44:00 AM
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raven hair within the green ribbon sails away too far to the unchained sky....!/// beautiful poetic expression
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Constance La France
Date: 4/1/2019 8:58:00 AM
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Mahtab, thanks for the visit and the beautiful ~

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