Green

“I want to be alone… with someone else who wants to be alone.” – Dimitri Zaik


I was born an introvert, 
misplaced in an extroverted garden.
Mother's cocoon,
which once kept me safe and warm,
now left me exposed to 
green-eyed predators,
who stole my fluorescent fragility.

Is it any wonder that in adolescence,
my heart resembles red glass, 
which can shatter at the slightest betrayal,
bleeding in crushing, harlequin drops.

In between the silence of heartbeats,
there was a demonic darkness,
plaguing the scent of my honeysuckle aura—
making me feel an imperfection of ugliness.

Until a vision of a celestial silhouette,
appeared in evergreen ethereal tones.
His smile glistened like tender 
pearls of white, seducing 
my senses speechless.
I am like a drop of rain upon 
his petals of orchid glory.

I know there will be monsoon seasons,
erratic elements harassing my presence,
among his poetic prestige, 
yet, I yearn to be
the one,
who is forever enthroned by 
his emerald eminence.
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La France Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 11:39 PM
Ink, excellent poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, I like the quote, Constance
Jones Avatar
October 5, 2023 at 10:26 AM
Congratulations on your win!
George Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 5:37 AM
A poet, I believe is generally one with a highly sensitive heart. Such a person will be very vulnerable to the attacks of green eyed predators. I can sense the tinge of melancholy plaguing you. Never let anybody steal your calm. When others see you exceliing more than them in your area of activity, a kind of green eyed jealousy overpowers them. It is natural.... ! Just ignore it."I am like a drop of rain upon his petals of orchid glory." Lovely analogy. 'Green' in your hands has acquired the beauty and glitter of emerald stone.
Empress Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 11:06 AM
This comment means everything to me beautiful soul! Thank you so much and i agree with u poets are highly senstive souls thats what i feel too, as words mean alot to them, you are such a precious soul that i truly admire
Kaufman Avatar
September 30, 2023 at 3:29 AM
Dear Ink, This is such a vivid and intriguing entry into the contest which is heating up a lot. Amazing and wonderful to read such poetic penning here. I am so impressed. Enjoyed.
Empress Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 8:26 AM
Thank you so very much kind soul always for your support
Scott Avatar
September 29, 2023 at 3:08 PM
"I am like a drop of rain upon his petals of orchid glory." Delicious.
Empress Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 8:24 AM
Thank you sam for pointing out your fave line. Grateful for your support
Buhagiar Avatar
September 29, 2023 at 2:48 AM
I was an extrovert one. How people change. Now I prefer to be alone and read wonderful poetry like yours. How can one not admire your powerful poem? So deep and so well written. Great poetry.
Empress Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 8:19 AM
Thank you so very much Victor. Time yes changes alot. Appreciate your support
Daniel Avatar
September 29, 2023 at 2:26 AM
Awesome poetry, IE, you let rip your emotions in this one, free verse doesn't come as easily to me...
Empress Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 8:19 AM
Thank you so much: free verse comes easiest for me i admire your rhymes. Rhymes are hard for me. I appreciate your support
Empress Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 8:19 AM
Thank you so much: free verse comes easiest for me i admire your rhymes. Rhymes are hard for me. I appreciate your support
Baker Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 11:28 PM
From innocence through fear, to maturity and an open heart; you emerge a woman with honorable yearnings. Your poem is gentle and harsh and strong and Loving. Thanks for sharing your sensitivity with us through your soulful poetry, dear Empress. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
Empress Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 8:16 AM
You are so kind Bill thank you so very much always for your sincere support
Hind Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 4:51 PM
This is so fragile and delicate.. I loved reading your mind tonight.
Empress Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 8:05 AM
Awwn sweet soul thank you so very much
Empress Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 8:04 AM
Awwn sweet soul thank you so very much
Andresen Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 1:25 PM
- A deeply emotional poem ... richly described metaphorically and poetically ... best wishes in the contest, Ink :) - hugs
Empress Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 8:00 AM
Thank you always dear Anne Lise for your kindness and support truly grateful
Rose  Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 11:29 AM
Your Majesty your poetic endeavor has been enthroned, love it, Empress !
Empress Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 7:35 AM
Thank you so much sweet rose haha ur “majesty” made me laugh. You are cute
Poet Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 8:02 AM
Your mastery of language, dear Ink, is truly exceptional. The way you carefully select each word brings forth a flood of emotions that strike at the core. Your poetic prowess is nothing short of stunning! I am also captivated by the manner in which you explore the vulnerability of innocence, as it falls victim to the treachery of a malevolent world. The vivid imagery you create with your words is simply awe-inspiring, and your use of poetic techniques enhances the beauty of your work.
Empress Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 10:28 AM
Thank u always for your kind support, i appreciate your sincere support
Pandit Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 7:00 AM
In between the silence of heartbeats, there was a demonic darkness, plaguing the scent of my honeysuckle aura---excellence in your word choices, Ink, as always. Emotions resonate deeply throughout. Rejoice in your poetic eminence!
Empress Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 10:26 AM
Ahh thank you so much u always understand my poems. Appreciate ur support vijay. Grateful for your kindness
Lawless Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 6:02 AM
Just check under the bed every night and keep a pencil nearby .... and write....well done Ink....don't tip over the ink well...
Empress Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 10:15 AM
Lolol thank u John. Noted. Will do just that
Bahr Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 6:02 AM
This touches me deeply. Beautiful.
Empress Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 10:21 AM
Awn thank u been a while since iv read you. Hope u are doing well
Sharma  Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 4:38 AM
Oh my lovely Ink, you never cease to amaze me with your intriguing & heartfelt writes, such a brilliant take for the word 'Green' in the contest.. Those green eyed predators, erratic elements and worshippers of demonic darkness can never dim your scintillating shine, always remember that! And the way you've written about innocence being prone to betrayals and succumbing to an evil world, yet the soul found warmth in the beloved's smile "glistened like tender pearls of white"!! Just impeccable &
Empress Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 10:14 AM
Thank you always for your constant kind and sincere support truly i am grateful and blessed.
Sharma  Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 4:41 AM
"I am like a drop of rain upon his petals of orchid glory", " Evergreen ethereal tones", "scent of my honeysuckle aura", "fluorescent fragility", "my heart resembles red glass" So many intriguing and enchanting lines here with wonderful alliterative flow.. An impeccable write once again, with so many emotions, very profound! Keep shining dear Ink, best of luck for the contest too :)
Rhymes Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 4:31 AM
Awwww i love this . I love that quote …. I want to be alone with someone else who wants fo be alone . Well done
Empress Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 9:51 AM
Yes beautiful quote , thank u so much
One Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 4:31 AM
You have to careful of those green eyes predators, especially online with so many scammers and jealous ones.. this is a dark poem and one that I think Constance will like. You really know how to create imagery in your words and nice use of poetic techniques here like alliteration... erratic elements and evergreen ethereal are good examples.. there will always be monsoon seasons, good times and bad times, but always such things are temporary as is sorry and pain..
Empress Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 10:13 AM
Yes true raw emotions can be dark. Green eyed predators come dressed in golden feathers tho so its hard to tell. Online scammers lol u are funny. Thank u for reading i hope constance will like this too.
Onpaper Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 4:30 AM
Mmmmm misplaces in an extroverted garden.. in between the silence heartbeat.. oooo the imagery papi!!! Safe n warm??? Halooo I keep u safe n warm aaaa … I have good SPF for protection I tell u!!! There was a demonic darkness plaguing the scent of my honeysuckle aura..oooo the spooky depth of that!!! love that line !!!! Harassing my presence??? Who??? Tell me !! Now now !! gorgeous piece !
Onpaper Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 9:55 AM
Hahahah … I always have some saved for you aeee… it’s in my safe!!! U let me know I give u aeee
Empress Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 9:50 AM
Papi if ever anyone harass me ill come to u first i promise lol haha this is based on real life experiences, truth be written as alwys . Appreciate you reading
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