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“I want to be alone… with someone else who wants to be alone.” – Dimitri Zaik I was born an introvert, misplaced in an extroverted garden. Mother's cocoon, which once kept me safe and warm, now left me exposed to green-eyed predators, who stole my fluorescent fragility. Is it any wonder that in adolescence, my heart resembles red glass, which can shatter at the slightest betrayal, bleeding in crushing, harlequin drops. In between the silence of heartbeats, there was a demonic darkness, plaguing the scent of my honeysuckle aura— making me feel an imperfection of ugliness. Until a vision of a celestial silhouette, appeared in evergreen ethereal tones. His smile glistened like tender pearls of white, seducing my senses speechless. I am like a drop of rain upon his petals of orchid glory. I know there will be monsoon seasons, erratic elements harassing my presence, among his poetic prestige, yet, I yearn to be the one, who is forever enthroned by his emerald eminence.

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Date: 10/8/2023 11:39:00 PM
Ink, excellent poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, I like the quote, Constance
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Date: 10/5/2023 10:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 10/1/2023 5:37:00 AM
A poet, I believe is generally one with a highly sensitive heart. Such a person will be very vulnerable to the attacks of green eyed predators. I can sense the tinge of melancholy plaguing you. Never let anybody steal your calm. When others see you exceliing more than them in your area of activity, a kind of green eyed jealousy overpowers them. It is natural.... ! Just ignore it."I am like a drop of rain upon his petals of orchid glory." Lovely analogy. 'Green' in your hands has acquired the beauty and glitter of emerald stone.
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Date: 10/1/2023 11:06:00 AM
This comment means everything to me beautiful soul! Thank you so much and i agree with u poets are highly senstive souls thats what i feel too, as words mean alot to them, you are such a precious soul that i truly admire
Date: 9/30/2023 3:29:00 AM
Dear Ink, This is such a vivid and intriguing entry into the contest which is heating up a lot. Amazing and wonderful to read such poetic penning here. I am so impressed. Enjoyed.
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Date: 10/1/2023 8:26:00 AM
Thank you so very much kind soul always for your support
Date: 9/29/2023 3:08:00 PM
"I am like a drop of rain upon his petals of orchid glory." Delicious.
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Date: 10/1/2023 8:24:00 AM
Thank you sam for pointing out your fave line. Grateful for your support
Date: 9/29/2023 2:48:00 AM
I was an extrovert one. How people change. Now I prefer to be alone and read wonderful poetry like yours. How can one not admire your powerful poem? So deep and so well written. Great poetry.
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Date: 10/1/2023 8:19:00 AM
Thank you so very much Victor. Time yes changes alot. Appreciate your support
Date: 9/29/2023 2:26:00 AM
Awesome poetry, IE, you let rip your emotions in this one, free verse doesn't come as easily to me...
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Date: 10/1/2023 8:19:00 AM
Thank you so much: free verse comes easiest for me i admire your rhymes. Rhymes are hard for me. I appreciate your support
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Date: 10/1/2023 8:19:00 AM
Thank you so much: free verse comes easiest for me i admire your rhymes. Rhymes are hard for me. I appreciate your support
Date: 9/28/2023 11:28:00 PM
From innocence through fear, to maturity and an open heart; you emerge a woman with honorable yearnings. Your poem is gentle and harsh and strong and Loving. Thanks for sharing your sensitivity with us through your soulful poetry, dear Empress. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Date: 10/1/2023 8:16:00 AM
You are so kind Bill thank you so very much always for your sincere support
Date: 9/28/2023 4:51:00 PM
This is so fragile and delicate.. I loved reading your mind tonight.
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Date: 10/1/2023 8:05:00 AM
Awwn sweet soul thank you so very much
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Date: 10/1/2023 8:04:00 AM
Awwn sweet soul thank you so very much
Date: 9/28/2023 1:25:00 PM
- A deeply emotional poem ... richly described metaphorically and poetically ... best wishes in the contest, Ink :) - hugs
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Date: 10/1/2023 8:00:00 AM
Thank you always dear Anne Lise for your kindness and support truly grateful
Date: 9/28/2023 11:29:00 AM
Your Majesty your poetic endeavor has been enthroned, love it, Empress !
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Date: 10/1/2023 7:35:00 AM
Thank you so much sweet rose haha ur “majesty” made me laugh. You are cute
Date: 9/28/2023 8:18:00 AM
An emerald prince? Why not. I think a lot of introverts find expression through social media. It feels safer, freer for them to be themselves, or, in some cases, someone else. But, as your poem points out, it's not really safe at all. Predators of all sorts lurk incognito. But true friends are saviors of a sort, supportive folk who make us feel good at the end of the day
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Date: 9/28/2023 10:30:00 AM
So true, anyone can be anything online. But being an introvert is a bit deeper than that. I can always switch off online but in real life nope. Haha. So its hard, im blessed with many kind and sincere friends that would do anything to support me which im truly grateful for. Thank u also for ur support. Uve been nothing but kind
Date: 9/28/2023 8:02:00 AM
Your mastery of language, dear Ink, is truly exceptional. The way you carefully select each word brings forth a flood of emotions that strike at the core. Your poetic prowess is nothing short of stunning! I am also captivated by the manner in which you explore the vulnerability of innocence, as it falls victim to the treachery of a malevolent world. The vivid imagery you create with your words is simply awe-inspiring, and your use of poetic techniques enhances the beauty of your work.
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Date: 9/28/2023 10:28:00 AM
Thank u always for your kind support, i appreciate your sincere support
Date: 9/28/2023 7:00:00 AM
In between the silence of heartbeats, there was a demonic darkness, plaguing the scent of my honeysuckle aura---excellence in your word choices, Ink, as always. Emotions resonate deeply throughout. Rejoice in your poetic eminence!
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Date: 9/28/2023 10:26:00 AM
Ahh thank you so much u always understand my poems. Appreciate ur support vijay. Grateful for your kindness
Date: 9/28/2023 6:02:00 AM
This touches me deeply. Beautiful.
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Date: 9/28/2023 10:21:00 AM
Awn thank u been a while since iv read you. Hope u are doing well
Date: 9/28/2023 6:02:00 AM
Just check under the bed every night and keep a pencil nearby .... and write....well done Ink....don't tip over the ink well...
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Date: 9/28/2023 10:15:00 AM
Lolol thank u John. Noted. Will do just that
Date: 9/28/2023 4:38:00 AM
Oh my lovely Ink, you never cease to amaze me with your intriguing & heartfelt writes, such a brilliant take for the word 'Green' in the contest.. Those green eyed predators, erratic elements and worshippers of demonic darkness can never dim your scintillating shine, always remember that! And the way you've written about innocence being prone to betrayals and succumbing to an evil world, yet the soul found warmth in the beloved's smile "glistened like tender pearls of white"!! Just impeccable &
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Date: 9/28/2023 10:14:00 AM
Thank you always for your constant kind and sincere support truly i am grateful and blessed.
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Date: 9/28/2023 4:41:00 AM
"I am like a drop of rain upon his petals of orchid glory", " Evergreen ethereal tones", "scent of my honeysuckle aura", "fluorescent fragility", "my heart resembles red glass" So many intriguing and enchanting lines here with wonderful alliterative flow.. An impeccable write once again, with so many emotions, very profound! Keep shining dear Ink, best of luck for the contest too :)
Date: 9/28/2023 4:31:00 AM
You have to careful of those green eyes predators, especially online with so many scammers and jealous ones.. this is a dark poem and one that I think Constance will like. You really know how to create imagery in your words and nice use of poetic techniques here like alliteration... erratic elements and evergreen ethereal are good examples.. there will always be monsoon seasons, good times and bad times, but always such things are temporary as is sorry and pain..
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Date: 9/28/2023 10:13:00 AM
Yes true raw emotions can be dark. Green eyed predators come dressed in golden feathers tho so its hard to tell. Online scammers lol u are funny. Thank u for reading i hope constance will like this too.
Date: 9/28/2023 4:31:00 AM
Awwww i love this . I love that quote …. I want to be alone with someone else who wants fo be alone . Well done
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Date: 9/28/2023 9:51:00 AM
Yes beautiful quote , thank u so much
Date: 9/28/2023 4:30:00 AM
Mmmmm misplaces in an extroverted garden.. in between the silence heartbeat.. oooo the imagery papi!!! Safe n warm??? Halooo I keep u safe n warm aaaa … I have good SPF for protection I tell u!!! There was a demonic darkness plaguing the scent of my honeysuckle aura..oooo the spooky depth of that!!! love that line !!!! Harassing my presence??? Who??? Tell me !! Now now !! gorgeous piece !
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Date: 9/28/2023 9:55:00 AM
Hahahah … I always have some saved for you aeee… it’s in my safe!!! U let me know I give u aeee
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Date: 9/28/2023 9:50:00 AM
Papi if ever anyone harass me ill come to u first i promise lol haha this is based on real life experiences, truth be written as alwys . Appreciate you reading

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