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Green

green caterpillar
pupates....
yellow swallowtail

                   gardener's inner joy  

non-traditional

naturehaiku

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Brian Sambourne

May 31, 2021 at 1:27 PM

A beauty! A grand read for a spring day. Cheers Brian

Sara Kendrick

June 1, 2021 at 6:03 AM

Thanks so much, Brian. Sara

John Fleming

April 26, 2021 at 7:56 AM

Very nicely encapsulated, Sara...and belated congrats on your worthy poem of the day. Cheers! :) john

Sara Kendrick

April 26, 2021 at 1:38 PM

Ahhh!! Thanks, John. Sara

Jenna Logan

April 1, 2021 at 3:32 AM

So sorry I missed congratulating you sooner.

Sara Kendrick

April 2, 2021 at 4:19 AM

Jenna, Perfectly okay. Sara

Line Gauthier

March 30, 2021 at 12:31 PM

Delightful POTD, Sara ~

Sara Kendrick

April 2, 2021 at 4:17 AM

Line, Kind of you to drop by. Sara

Gershon Wolf

March 29, 2021 at 9:04 PM

So deserving of POTD, Sara! Congrats! :) gw

Sara Kendrick

April 2, 2021 at 4:15 AM

Gershon, Thanks..Sara

Arturo Michael

March 29, 2021 at 9:55 AM

Lovely one. Congratulations Sara Kendrick on POTD.

Sara Kendrick

April 2, 2021 at 4:10 AM

Michael, Thanks for dropping by with congrats. Sara

Brandy Nicole

March 27, 2021 at 9:44 PM

So many different Creatures in nature hold beauty. Like the "Butterfly" Its transformation truly amazes me. Your thoughts leave me in complete awe. Congratulations Sara, on Poem of the Day. :) Hugs, Brandy

Sara Kendrick

April 1, 2021 at 1:49 PM

Brandy, Your kind review of my work inspires me to keep going. Your stopping by with congrats is appreciated. Sara

Anitha Jayasankar

March 27, 2021 at 9:14 PM

What a beautiful poem with great imagery... Congrats on your POTD dear Sara... Hugs.. ~ Ani

Sara Kendrick

April 1, 2021 at 6:35 AM

Anitha, Your presence at my page with congrats is enlivening. Sara

Eve Roper

March 27, 2021 at 5:23 PM

Great imagery, Sara, congratulations on POTD. Hugs Eve

Sara Kendrick

April 1, 2021 at 4:50 AM

Eve, Thanks for dropping by with congrats. Sara

Tania Kitchin

March 27, 2021 at 4:56 PM

Beautiful imagery Sara, congratulations on POTD!

Sara Kendrick

April 1, 2021 at 4:47 AM

Tania, Your visit is encouraging. Sara

L Milton Hankins

March 27, 2021 at 4:02 PM

Congratulations on your POTD, Sara, with this non-traditional haiku. Well done!

Sara Kendrick

April 1, 2021 at 4:45 AM

Milton, Thanks for dropping by with congrats. Sara

Gary Radice

March 27, 2021 at 3:41 PM

Congratulations Sara!

Sara Kendrick

March 29, 2021 at 2:06 PM

Gary, Thanks. Sara

Jennifer Fenn

March 27, 2021 at 3:41 PM

I like the simple imagery in this! Beautiful haiku, and I’m glad it got POTD. Well deserved!

Sara Kendrick

April 1, 2021 at 4:43 AM

Jennifer, I appreciate the time spent here reading and commenting on my work. Thanks..Sara

Constance La France

March 27, 2021 at 12:40 PM

Sara, congratulations on receiving POEM OF THE DAY with your non-traditional haiku, well done _Constance

Sara Kendrick

March 29, 2021 at 2:10 PM

Constance, Thanks for dropping by with congrats. Your presence was supportive. Sara

Ken Rone

March 27, 2021 at 10:45 AM

A POTD gem ( emerald). I loved your choice if title. - KR

Sara Kendrick

March 29, 2021 at 2:07 PM

Ken, Emerald one of my favorite gems. Thanks for the encouraging review. Sara

Joseph May

March 27, 2021 at 8:58 AM

Beautiful write Sara.. Congrats on POTD

Sara Kendrick

March 29, 2021 at 2:01 PM

Joseph, Your stopping by with congrats is constructive for me. Sara

Regina Mcintosh

March 27, 2021 at 8:56 AM

Lovely. Congrats on POTD. God bless you with love, Gina

Sara Kendrick

March 29, 2021 at 1:59 PM

Regina, Your presence at my page with congrats is very neighborly. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 27, 2021 at 8:28 AM

- Beautiful, Sara :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

March 29, 2021 at 1:56 PM

SS, Your supportive visits to my page are serendipitous. Sara

Heidi Sands

March 27, 2021 at 7:12 AM

Congratulations for this beautiful POTD Sara :)

Sara Kendrick

March 29, 2021 at 1:50 PM

Heidi, Your stopping by to say congrats is uplifting. Sara

Warren Doll

March 27, 2021 at 6:47 AM

Sara, brilliant haiku full of wonderful imagery. Congratulations on POTD~ Warren

Sara Kendrick

March 29, 2021 at 1:48 PM

Warren, Your review of my work is so helpful. I appreciate you dropping by. Sara

Robert Pettit

March 27, 2021 at 6:15 AM

Congratulations on being chosen as poem of the day. A great choice made by the Soup.

Sara Kendrick

March 28, 2021 at 8:03 AM

Robert, Your kind review is delightful. Thanks ..Sara

J. Summers

March 27, 2021 at 6:07 AM

Congratulations on POTD. Swallowtails are among my favorites as is your poem. John

Sara Kendrick

March 28, 2021 at 7:53 AM

J, I am glad that you like the swallowtails and my work. I enjoy seeing them in the summer. They are not plentiful but I am going to try to plant some species of plants that attract them. I hope it works out. I know that the caterpillars will eat the plants though which is not what I really want but I need to over plant so they and some plants will survive. Sara

Kim Merryman

March 27, 2021 at 6:06 AM

I love the before and after picture! Congrats on your POTD, Sara! Blessings, Kim M

Sara Kendrick

March 28, 2021 at 7:46 AM

Kim, I appreciate you dropping by with congrats. I always need the blessings. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

March 27, 2021 at 6:06 AM

Congratulations for your POTD.

Sara Kendrick

March 28, 2021 at 7:48 AM

Victor, Thanks, Sara

John Lawless

March 27, 2021 at 5:17 AM

All this lacks is a dandelion for it to alight on.....nicely cone Sara.

Sara Kendrick

March 27, 2021 at 9:37 AM

John, Those dandelions will be at peak season soon and so will the butterflies. I hope I have as many this year as last year. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

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