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Green - I have seen you somewhere within

Green - I have seen you somewhere within my evergreen soul Where the Omniscient plays his flute To rejuvenate the tired ones - scattered by the humdrum of daily chores His idiosyncratic tune soothes my heart Green - I have seen you somewhere within the desolated dry lands Where you assure us of a definite return Spiralling with the next rain to come - with the seeds of new love Sprouting with our endless hopes - in the hands of caressing farmers Farmers of life too Green - I have seen you somewhere within the falling leaves Burnt by the desires of their own - dejected souls Still they fall on the ground from where they got nourishment Mix them with their mother to make her fertile To maintain the perpetual flow of love To the next progeny An evergreen dream Comes true Green - I have seen you somewhere within ... My desperate hopes 01.03.16

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 5/6/2016 11:08:00 AM

Greetings Anindya. Congrats for your WIN with this wonderful piece!! ;-)

Casarah Nance

Date: 5/4/2016 10:03:00 PM

I like the repetition of the line "Green-I have seen you somewhere within..." Very nicely done. Thank you for sharing it as your favorite write.

Manmath Dalei

Date: 4/2/2016 12:41:00 PM

Awesome presentation with Indian touch. Very impressive. Nice ending......hugs

Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 4/3/2016 8:28:00 AM

Thank you, Manmath. Hugs, Bobby

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 4/1/2016 8:05:00 AM

You have brought a new aura of creativity to Poetry Soup!!!! Congrats Anindya, for your first placement in the contest!!! ;-)

Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 4/3/2016 8:28:00 AM

Truly humbled. Thanks Teddy. Hugs, Bobby

Charlie Smith

Date: 3/30/2016 3:01:00 PM

Great write! Great win! congratulations Anindya...

Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 4/3/2016 8:25:00 AM

Thanks a lot Charlie. Hugs, Bobby

Anisha Dutta

Date: 3/28/2016 12:51:00 AM

Great Congrats Anindya to win the top place. Best Wishes. Anisha D

Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 3/30/2016 11:15:00 AM

Thank you dear Didi. Hugs, Bobby

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 3/27/2016 4:53:00 PM

Congratulations on your beautiful winning poem. A definite Fav for me. SuZ

Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 3/30/2016 11:14:00 AM

Thank you dear, Suzanne. Hugs, Bobby

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/27/2016 2:39:00 PM

Hi Bobby, Congratulations on your win in the contest. Your dream of green just makes such beautiful images float through my mind. The words just flowed from the start to the finish Bobby. This is excellent poetry. This write deserves the highest rating so a seven is given my friend and it definitely goes into my faves....Vlad.

Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 3/30/2016 11:13:00 AM

Thank you dear, Vlad. I am humbled. Hugs, Bobby

Brian Davey

Date: 3/27/2016 5:51:00 AM

Congratulations on your first placement in this contest, well deserved

Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 3/27/2016 9:10:00 AM

Thank you so very much, Brian. Hugs, Bobby

Probir Gupta

Date: 3/27/2016 4:49:00 AM

An evergreen feeling conveyed to all readers. Great indeed. Congratulations to the green for the befitting win...

Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 3/27/2016 9:09:00 AM

Thank you, Sir. I am humbled. Respectful greetings, Bobby

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/27/2016 4:07:00 AM

Congratulations Bobby on your deserving first place. Your poem is exquisite! #7 Going into my faves!

Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 3/27/2016 9:08:00 AM

Thank you so very much, Connie, for your continuous support and love. Feeling honoured and blessed. Hugs, Bobby

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/27/2016 1:09:00 AM

Hello Bobby, thank you for sharing your green poem in my going green contest. Congratulations on your Going Green Win. Stop by my blog "OH NO, OH NO (it's me again) drop a smile if you like :) Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 3/27/2016 9:05:00 AM

How do I thank thee? Let me count the ways... Haha! You know Linda, if I meet you someday somewhere in this world, I am gonna give you a real tight hug. XX, Bobby

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/14/2016 10:53:00 PM

Hi Bobby, Congratulations on your Greenish win. Love LINDA

Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 3/27/2016 8:58:00 AM

XOXO, Bobby

Elaine George

Date: 3/3/2016 5:50:00 AM

I really like your take on this, Anindya. Many congrats on your win. Elaine

Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 3/3/2016 11:01:00 AM

So nice of you, Elaine. Happy to know that you liked it. Thanks for your visit and compliments. Hugs, Bobby

Joseph May

Date: 3/2/2016 10:17:00 PM

Congrats on a great win

Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 3/3/2016 4:44:00 AM

Thank you, Joseph. Hugs, Bobby

Constance La France

Date: 3/2/2016 9:37:00 PM

Bobby, I really like where you went with this theme, congratulations on your wonderfully penned write, I am loving this 7 ~

Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 3/3/2016 4:44:00 AM

Truly honoured, Constance. Thanks for your visit and beautiful compliments. Hugs, Bobby

Eve Roper

Date: 3/2/2016 7:23:00 PM

Anindya, congratulations on your win in the contest.

Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 3/3/2016 4:42:00 AM

Thanks a lot,Eve. Hugs, Bobby

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/2/2016 5:47:00 PM

Hi Bobby, Congratulations on your win in the contest. Loved the write....Vlad.

Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 3/3/2016 4:41:00 AM

Hello Vlad, Thanks a lot for your visit and likings. Hugs, Bobby

Lu Loo

Date: 3/2/2016 3:23:00 PM

Anindya, congrats on your placement in the contest! :)-luloo

Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 3/3/2016 3:34:00 AM

Thanks a lot, Luloo. Hugs, Bobby

Sandra Haight

Date: 3/2/2016 8:03:00 AM

Such a beautiful poem, Bobby, with lovely, soulful tributes to the color green. I wish you all the best for the contest. Sandra

Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 3/2/2016 8:25:00 AM

Truly honoured, Sandra. Thank you for your visit and encouraging comments. When I joined Poetry Soup, just six months back, I never thought I would get so much love and encouragement from here. Hugs, Bobby