Green - I Have Seen You Somewhere Within

Green - I have seen you somewhere within my evergreen soul
Where the Omniscient plays his flute
To rejuvenate the tired ones - scattered by the humdrum of daily chores
His idiosyncratic tune soothes my heart

Green - I have seen you somewhere within the desolated dry lands
Where you assure us of a definite return
Spiralling with the next rain to come - with the seeds of new love
Sprouting with our endless hopes - in the hands of caressing farmers
Farmers of life too

Green - I have seen you somewhere within the falling leaves
Burnt by the desires of their own - dejected souls
Still they fall on the ground from where they got nourishment
Mix them with their mother to make her fertile
To maintain the perpetual flow of love
To the next progeny

An evergreen dream
Comes true
Green - I have seen you somewhere within ... 
My desperate hopes


01.03.16

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 5/6/2016 11:08:00 AM
Greetings Anindya. Congrats for your WIN with this wonderful piece!! ;-)
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Date: 5/4/2016 10:03:00 PM
I like the repetition of the line "Green-I have seen you somewhere within..." Very nicely done. Thank you for sharing it as your favorite write.
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Date: 4/2/2016 12:41:00 PM
Awesome presentation with Indian touch. Very impressive. Nice ending......hugs
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 4/3/2016 8:28:00 AM
Thank you, Manmath. Hugs, Bobby
Date: 4/1/2016 8:05:00 AM
You have brought a new aura of creativity to Poetry Soup!!!! Congrats Anindya, for your first placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 4/3/2016 8:28:00 AM
Truly humbled. Thanks Teddy. Hugs, Bobby
Date: 3/30/2016 3:01:00 PM
Great write! Great win! congratulations Anindya...
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 4/3/2016 8:25:00 AM
Thanks a lot Charlie. Hugs, Bobby
Date: 3/28/2016 12:51:00 AM
Great Congrats Anindya to win the top place. Best Wishes. Anisha D
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 3/30/2016 11:15:00 AM
Thank you dear Didi. Hugs, Bobby
Date: 3/27/2016 4:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your beautiful winning poem. A definite Fav for me. SuZ
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 3/30/2016 11:14:00 AM
Thank you dear, Suzanne. Hugs, Bobby
Date: 3/27/2016 2:39:00 PM
Hi Bobby, Congratulations on your win in the contest. Your dream of green just makes such beautiful images float through my mind. The words just flowed from the start to the finish Bobby. This is excellent poetry. This write deserves the highest rating so a seven is given my friend and it definitely goes into my faves....Vlad.
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 3/30/2016 11:13:00 AM
Thank you dear, Vlad. I am humbled. Hugs, Bobby
Date: 3/27/2016 5:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your first placement in this contest, well deserved
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 3/27/2016 9:10:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Brian. Hugs, Bobby
Date: 3/27/2016 4:49:00 AM
An evergreen feeling conveyed to all readers. Great indeed. Congratulations to the green for the befitting win...
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 3/27/2016 9:09:00 AM
Thank you, Sir. I am humbled. Respectful greetings, Bobby
Date: 3/27/2016 4:07:00 AM
Congratulations Bobby on your deserving first place. Your poem is exquisite! #7 Going into my faves!
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 3/27/2016 9:08:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Connie, for your continuous support and love. Feeling honoured and blessed. Hugs, Bobby
Date: 3/27/2016 1:09:00 AM
Hello Bobby, thank you for sharing your green poem in my going green contest. Congratulations on your Going Green Win. Stop by my blog "OH NO, OH NO (it's me again) drop a smile if you like :) Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 3/27/2016 9:05:00 AM
How do I thank thee? Let me count the ways... Haha! You know Linda, if I meet you someday somewhere in this world, I am gonna give you a real tight hug. XX, Bobby
Date: 3/14/2016 10:53:00 PM
Hi Bobby, Congratulations on your Greenish win. Love LINDA
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 3/27/2016 8:58:00 AM
XOXO, Bobby
Date: 3/3/2016 5:50:00 AM
I really like your take on this, Anindya. Many congrats on your win. Elaine
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 3/3/2016 11:01:00 AM
So nice of you, Elaine. Happy to know that you liked it. Thanks for your visit and compliments. Hugs, Bobby
Date: 3/2/2016 10:17:00 PM
Congrats on a great win
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 3/3/2016 4:44:00 AM
Thank you, Joseph. Hugs, Bobby
Date: 3/2/2016 9:37:00 PM
Bobby, I really like where you went with this theme, congratulations on your wonderfully penned write, I am loving this 7 ~
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 3/3/2016 4:44:00 AM
Truly honoured, Constance. Thanks for your visit and beautiful compliments. Hugs, Bobby
Date: 3/2/2016 7:23:00 PM
Anindya, congratulations on your win in the contest.
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 3/3/2016 4:42:00 AM
Thanks a lot,Eve. Hugs, Bobby
Date: 3/2/2016 5:47:00 PM
Hi Bobby, Congratulations on your win in the contest. Loved the write....Vlad.
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 3/3/2016 4:41:00 AM
Hello Vlad, Thanks a lot for your visit and likings. Hugs, Bobby
Date: 3/2/2016 3:23:00 PM
Anindya, congrats on your placement in the contest! :)-luloo
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 3/3/2016 3:34:00 AM
Thanks a lot, Luloo. Hugs, Bobby
Date: 3/2/2016 8:03:00 AM
Such a beautiful poem, Bobby, with lovely, soulful tributes to the color green. I wish you all the best for the contest. Sandra
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 3/2/2016 8:25:00 AM
Truly honoured, Sandra. Thank you for your visit and encouraging comments. When I joined Poetry Soup, just six months back, I never thought I would get so much love and encouragement from here. Hugs, Bobby
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