Greek Mythologys Medusa

A Greek mythological classical character chosen,
Medusa with her snake hair and stone stare, a frozen
Look turning people to stone, originally a vision of beauty,
A woman of erotic desire, who inflicted unimaginable cruelty,
Her destiny to become an unapproachable monster,
Many attempted to kill her, heroes and many a mobster,
Her punishment, all because Poseidon willfully raped her
Bringing about woe upon all women whoever they were.
The Greek God Perseus renowned for killing
Such beasts, ordered by King Polydectus whether willing
Or not, to go and bring back her head,
Perseus had a plan how to slay Medusa, delivering it dead.
This was a hero, but still sweat collected on his brow, DRIP
Drip, drip, but bravely approached her abode, a swift SNIP 
Went his sharp sword which did ,SMASH
Down with might, and Medusa’s blood did SPLASH
It was rumored that from the severed head came a BELCH
As her blood in Perseus’s hands went SQUELCH.
This warrior’s deed was certainly brash, swiftly did snatch
Medusa’s head, Perseus the hero for whom there was no match.
Well worked his plan, held his shield at an angle, a space 
At which he could see the reflection of her face
On his shield, but not look into her eyes, he scored an ace,
The horrifying snakes in her hair died, her eyes ablaze
A statue of Medusa’s head shown as averting assailant’s gaze. 

Contest Entry: Onomatopoeia Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Emile Pinet
Date: 01/11/2021

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Date: 2/26/2022 5:32:00 AM
Mythological characters are interesting and puzzling at the same time. You have presented this monstrous Goddess in all her gruesome appearance and the tale of revenge by Polydectus on Medusa and Perseus's severing of her head !
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Date: 11/21/2021 11:10:00 AM
by the way, I have been busy preparing for a week in Iowa. Leaving tomorrow, so I probably won't find time to visit my friends for a week. Just wanted to say how much I appreciate all the comments your recently made to me. Thanks!!!
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Date: 11/21/2021 11:09:00 AM
wow, you really know how to tell a tale, Jennifer. I kept clicking on poems looking for one I had not seen yet and this is it!! I think your muse is going to be ever alive!!
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Date: 11/12/2021 8:54:00 PM
Great work, Jennifer. I was waiting for more cultural offerings from Greek-South-African, J. Proxenos. shalom, shalom and Eirene
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Date: 11/11/2021 3:27:00 AM
Love mythological compositions! This one is a classic example with great onomatopoeic effect! Somewhere I read Medusa's head! Your mighty pen reminds me of that! Metaphorical and vivid! Thanks for the splendid share! My best regards!
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Date: 11/9/2021 2:08:00 PM
You are a wonderful story teller Jennifer. You painted your story in great imagery. All the best.
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Date: 11/7/2021 7:41:00 PM
Love the write, Jen, I am a Percy Jackson The Lightning Thief fan. and you did this so well.
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Date: 11/6/2021 8:50:00 PM
Great imagery fills this marvellous piece Jennifer, nice insightfulness here displayed. Have a blessed weekend, yours truly Gordon ??????
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Date: 11/6/2021 3:34:00 PM
Hello Jennifer ... what a tale, and you did a great job in poetic form. A real classic indeed - thank you Jennifer - Lindsay
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Date: 11/6/2021 6:04:00 AM
I hope it will be placed in the contest. It is amazing. You have penned it so well. Jennifer. Stay blessed my friend. And more power to your pen.
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Date: 11/6/2021 6:02:00 AM
Oh goodness. Your poems are love. What a talented poet (poetess) you are... Impressive!
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Date: 11/5/2021 11:36:00 AM
Your "GREEK MYTHOLOGYS MEDUSA" is a wonderful write. I really enjoyed it. Have a blessed/fun day..................
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Date: 11/4/2021 7:33:00 AM
I always loved to read Mythology from my early teen years. This is great Jennifer. Good luck in the contest. God Bless, JB
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Date: 11/3/2021 7:55:00 PM
Wow, Powerful and well written poem Jennifer! :)
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Date: 11/3/2021 4:42:00 PM
Amazing write, Jennifer. Are you sure that you are not related to Edith Hamilton? She was the author of a book titled 'Mythology' that I had to wade through in high school, and I wonder if she had the command you have of these stories. Excelsior! :) Gershon
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Date: 11/3/2021 2:00:00 PM
I love mythology, this was cleverly penned and a fun read.
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Date: 11/3/2021 12:42:00 PM
Hello Jennifer, oh -this is such an interesting poem. I believe she got what she deserved. Good luck in the constest. Hugs.
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Date: 11/2/2021 10:43:00 AM
An informative Greek Mythological write Jennifer, most interesting and perfect for Emile’s contest… Belle
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Date: 11/2/2021 10:23:00 AM
This myth, so well recreated in rhythm and rhyme Jennifer. The story flows so lyrically from your images. Love the way you integrated the perfectly chosen onomatopoeia words! Best wishes for the contest! Hugs and blessings!
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Date: 11/2/2021 6:51:00 AM
Really brought the myth to life. Excellent write and read! Ah, but is it all really Myth? For our real truth may be all that is inside...and the illusion, the eyes we call vision. Life is time and space we think. How boring, when compared to the power of dream, also thought. Love it!
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Date: 11/1/2021 1:55:00 PM
Great entry Jennifer, love how you used Greek mythology. Good luck, hope you are well. Tom
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