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Greek God - Hmmmm I Think Not

cocky Adonis poses naked on the beach sun hides behind cloud! 1st March 2018

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Niall Fulham
Date: 3/3/2018 10:26:00 AM
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Hi Jan , fair play to the sun hiding lol ::)))hugs
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/3/2018 3:12:00 PM
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I don't blame the sun at all lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 3/3/2018 3:22:00 AM
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Loved the humor in this clever senryu Jan! : )
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/3/2018 3:11:00 PM
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Thanks connie:-) hugs Jan xx
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Viv Wigley
Date: 3/2/2018 10:28:00 PM
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Definitely not me, jan- if I stood on the beach in my trunks I'd get mistaken for a broken deckchair :( . Thanks for the smile. Viv x
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/3/2018 3:11:00 PM
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You always make me smile Mr Viv xx hugs Jan xx
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/2/2018 8:51:00 PM
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HA. this is good!!
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/3/2018 3:10:00 PM
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Hee hee:-) hugs Jan xx
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/2/2018 1:39:00 AM
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Oh I can just see him, muscles everywhere, designer shades, big gold medallion, I said medadllion lol. But it will all sag eventually.
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/3/2018 3:09:00 PM
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Oh you saw him too tom lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 3/1/2018 6:13:00 PM
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cleverly worded, jan! very funny...
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/3/2018 3:08:00 PM
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I had fun with this one lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Mick Talbot
Date: 3/1/2018 3:36:00 PM
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A senryu comment... the poet Jan writes... expresses her feelings... pure genius... hugs Mick
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/3/2018 12:28:00 PM
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Aww thanks Mick I just try to make folks smile no genius here more a bird brain:-) hugs Jan xx
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/1/2018 2:56:00 PM
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The nude beach was further down... Cute poem, Jan. Pretty witty.
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/3/2018 12:27:00 PM
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Lol line:-) hugs Jan xx
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Anna Hopper
Date: 3/1/2018 10:27:00 AM
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Lol
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/1/2018 12:04:00 PM
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Thanks Anna glad I made you smile:-) hugs Jan xx

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