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Once elected into office He revealed he was no novice Going back on every promise With disdain and dose of malice To the land became a menace Did his best to hide the vices By the use of herbs and spices Used the art of false disguises But the stink of deep corruption Failed to mask excess consumption Till at last, greedy and bloated In disgrace, by people loathed Karma came with poisoned chalice Handing out poetic justice. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - For Carolyn Devonshire’s Contest: “Justice”. Placed 1st © 19th December 2018

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/8/2019 6:40:00 PM

Great one, Paul. Finally seeing this one of yours .Looks like it could describe a number of big wigs! Belated congrats

Paul Callus
Date: 2/9/2019 3:51:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea. Many people do not appear to bother much about corruption, 'til it suddenly sprouts in their backyard! Regards // paul

Vladislav Raven

Date: 1/4/2019 3:55:00 PM

Hi Paul, Belated congratulations on your win in the contest. Betrayal and corruption always bite deep. We always trust the word given but so few times is that word kept. I love the content, honest and true Paul. Have a wonderful weekend. Your friend always....Mike.

Paul Callus
Date: 1/6/2019 1:58:00 PM

Thank you for reading, liking and commenting, Mike. Always a pleasure to have you stopping by, my friend. Regards // paul

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 12/21/2018 1:11:00 PM

Hi Paul, Dropping by to say well done and congratulations. Your poems are all "Wow" ! Warmest regards, and festive wishes, Jennifer.

Paul Callus
Date: 12/22/2018 6:28:00 AM

Thank you for the two visits in quick succession, Jenny! May you and your family have a lovely and blessed Christmas. Warm regards // paul

Phillip Garcia

Date: 12/21/2018 12:55:00 PM

Spectacular, Paul! What a great example of rhyme's power when done well. Congrats on a well deserved victory with this write.

Paul Callus
Date: 12/22/2018 6:31:00 AM

Thank you very much, Phillip. Your comments are truly appreciated. Regards // paul

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 12/21/2018 5:34:00 AM

Hi, Paul, just a short visit Pa,ul to say congrats on being placed first . Your poem certainly deserved it , terrific write.. Warm regards, Jennifer.

Paul Callus
Date: 12/21/2018 9:20:00 AM

Thank you, Jenny. Have a lovely weekend. Warm regards // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 12/21/2018 2:57:00 AM

dropping back with my congrats Paul:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Callus
Date: 12/21/2018 9:20:00 AM

Thank you, Jan. I was wondering if planes were flying again!! Hugs // paul

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/21/2018 12:54:00 AM

Hi Paul, I knew this was a winner. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis

Paul Callus
Date: 12/22/2018 6:47:00 AM

Thank you for coming back with congrats, Alexis:) Have a lovely weekend. Regards // paul

John Hamilton

Date: 12/20/2018 8:49:00 PM

Very thoughtful write, notable rhymes, congrats on another win Paul!

Paul Callus
Date: 12/21/2018 9:42:00 AM

Thank you, John. Sending you wonderful season greetings. // paul

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/20/2018 5:50:00 PM

An all-too-familiar scenario, well-penned. Congrats on your win in the contest, Paul. Best wishes, Gershon

Paul Callus
Date: 12/21/2018 9:34:00 AM

I touched on one aspect of it, Gershon...on the other hands you pointed out several! Thank you for the comments and congrats. Regards // paul

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/20/2018 4:52:00 PM

That "poisoned chalice" of corruption certainly is something we see all too often, along with betrayal of public trust. Congratulations on a first-place win for your excellent poem, Paul, and thank you for supporting the contest. Love, Carolyn

Paul Callus
Date: 12/21/2018 9:27:00 AM

Thank you for my top placement, Carolyn. I had not realized you had a contest going, so I was only able to make it with a final burst of speed! Corruption, together with fake/broken promises are topics which must never be laid to rest. Have a lovely weekend. Love // paul

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/20/2018 2:06:00 PM

how power can corrupt, paul... a defining work...huggs

Paul Callus
Date: 12/20/2018 2:11:00 PM

Power corrupts the corruptible, Nette! I am sure some have things planned out beforehand! Thank you for visiting. Hugs // paul

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 12/20/2018 9:26:00 AM

Good one Paul, Good luck in the contest. Warm regards, Jennifer

Paul Callus
Date: 12/20/2018 9:46:00 AM

Thank you, Jenny. Have a nice afternoon. Warm regards // paul

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/20/2018 8:08:00 AM

You built a portrait of greed that flashes before us daily allover the world. Everyone can relate to your words Paul. All the best for a win.

Paul Callus
Date: 12/20/2018 8:53:00 AM

Thank you, Vijay. I won't tar all politicians with the same brush, but I know of several who abuse/d of the people's trust! Best regards // paul

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 12/20/2018 5:21:00 AM

A wonderful and genuine " poetic justice" Paul! A brilliant rendition of the mean manipulation of greedy of power.. deceiving others to attain their very whims and concerns.. powerful and expressive diction! An interesting work worthy of rereads and win.. a FAV. My deepest regards. Stay blessed always.

Paul Callus
Date: 12/20/2018 8:51:00 AM

I am a believer of justice, Besma; even if one eludes justice in this world s/he will surely receive it in another world! Thank you for the awesome feedback, my friend. ~ Warm regards & blessings // paul

Mpho Kgaswane

Date: 12/20/2018 1:11:00 AM

A very good poem. It expresses very well the mood of betrayal. Regards Mpho Kgaswane.

Paul Callus
Date: 12/20/2018 8:18:00 AM

Thank you for reading, commenting and liking, Mpho. Regards // paul

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/19/2018 11:14:00 PM

Hi Paul, This is a good entry contest theme. Your write made think of " Politicians" . They often make empty promises to get elected. Well done. I wish you best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Paul Callus
Date: 12/20/2018 8:12:00 AM

Yes, Alexis, the subject matter does refer to politicians. Empty promises are bad, but robbing from the country's coffers is even worse! Some believe that power gives them the power to do so! Regards // paul

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 12/19/2018 5:22:00 PM

Great entry for the contest, Paul, and I expect to see it at the top of the winner's list! il-milied it-tajjeb to you and your family - Bob

Paul Callus
Date: 12/19/2018 5:32:00 PM

Thank you Bob for stopping by with lovely comments and wishes. ~ Il-Milied it-tajjeb lilek u lil qrabatek. Regards // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 12/19/2018 4:55:00 PM

It may not refer to any president but it does ring true of some politicians around the world Paul! Good luck in the contest with this powerfully penned rhyme:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus
Date: 12/19/2018 5:07:00 PM

Hi Jan...Since I am referring to politician/s, I did not want fingers pointing at anyone...let's keep to the Christmas spirit!! Pleased you enjoy. It's past my bedtime, but can't empty my mail box! Hugs // paul