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Greater Consciousness

Greater consciousness Far from cognisance in darkness of day, Insensitive we wander conscience at bay, Cherishing beauty of nature limitless, His resources eaten exhausted boundless, Lost in materialism savour the marmalade, As tender souls writhe behind our facade, Illuminating aureole only to perceive, When decades of selfism time will deceive, The moment these ashes rest in urn, Greater consciousness to the soul will return, Bubbles in air float as all desires lay to rest, Merges into universe serene every conquest ! Written August 20th, 2015 For contest by Mystic rose

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Date: 8/21/2015 8:07:00 AM
Impressive piece! Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 8/21/2015 5:27:00 AM
Profoundly didactic, Dr. Upma. Great verses with deep meaning. A seven of course!
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Date: 8/21/2015 12:05:00 AM
Great writing, enjoyed every verse. Ending sublime! A7...
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Date: 8/20/2015 7:57:00 PM
Upma, beautifully penned for the contest, best of luck and thanks for all your visits to my poetry and comments ~~
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Date: 8/20/2015 5:08:00 PM
Very nicely penned Dr Upma....I especially enjoyed the fifth stanza...best wishes
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Date: 8/20/2015 3:51:00 PM
Good for you doing this poem. This is a topic I won't even touch with a ten foot pole. hahaha. (wish I were better with these kinds of thoughts!)
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Date: 8/20/2015 11:18:00 AM
such thought provoking words....really need to be heard....because this Life is just the test....which tells where each Soul will Eternally rest....;)
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