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Great White In the Deep Blue

You never see it coming, nor hear the sound it makes. But just know that if you do you had better start swimming faster, or you will soon know you just made a mistake. It smells you from a mile away just by the drop of blood, but you'll never know where it is, or where it came from until you see the fin. The most amazing and beautiful animal swimming in the unknown depths, just always know that he could be right on your left. He conjures up fear and brings a little scare, but do not always be afraid of the monster that swims where you dare. It is the great white shark, king of the ocean blue, you dare ever try to swim with it you will know soon that you are a fool.

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Date: 5/8/2018 2:23:00 PM
I have never even consider swimming in the ocean with a white shark. This poem has certainly brought out the Oh-My-Goodness-Feelings in me! Well written.Welcome to Poetry Soup!
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