Great Sullen Wind

A breeze that once lay cool in morn,
is face of death as dark was born.
On pebbled beach and under guise,
from sea to shore destroyed broad wise.

Great sullen wind awoke this night
and made old oak tree tremble fright.
Though might in years, he stood and shook
for death wind sought and life it took.

In churches huddled in the mass
we prayed the Lord would let it pass
and so He did and had it done
so weathered storms would see the sun.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Fisher Avatar
November 25, 2009 at 10:29 AM
Celeste - congrats on your featured poem this week. Rgds Janette
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November 23, 2009 at 7:48 PM
Interesting poem. Congratulations on your being featured this week. Happy Thanksgiving! Love, Iolanda
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November 23, 2009 at 11:54 AM
Many congratulations on your poetry being shared with us this week >> James
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November 23, 2009 at 8:41 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Celeste. Love, Carol
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November 23, 2009 at 3:09 AM
Excellent write and well deserving selection for being featured this week. Best wishes and keep writing. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
George   Avatar
December 7, 2008 at 2:38 AM
Wow!!! Celeste. What a picture you paint here. It is amazing how things change and a gentle breeze can gather power to be come a raging storm that will eventually pass as we weather the storm. Great writing here. Thank you for sharing. lainie
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December 4, 2008 at 6:42 PM
Even storms serve a purpose. People find faith when life becomes chaotic in the face of a storm. God Bless. Vince
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December 4, 2008 at 4:29 PM
Thank You for commenting on my poem, If only he would unblock me and read that poem but I can't tell him that cause he blocked me. . . Anyways, Thanks Again!! EXCELLENT Poem by the way!!!! Love Alexz Matheny ^_^
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