Great Ocean Highway Australia

Cobalt blue waters Flowing Freely Between Black Mountains in dark night

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James Fraser

Date: 8/14/2009 4:22:00 PM

Sara, very interesting and beautiful Haiki. I love the word cobalt>>James

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/14/2009 11:36:00 AM

This is a vividly painted, lovely image, Sara. And please keep me posted on the "bigfoot" finding. Barbara Gorelick and I have a great interest in this creature. We are both quite sure there is "something" out there!! Love, Carolyn

Jim Wilson

Date: 8/14/2009 7:17:00 AM

I like the use of color in this haiku; very vivid.

Gert W. Knop

Date: 8/14/2009 5:19:00 AM

Cobalt blue to emerald green, who ever has been to Australia got an impression of the different colours of the ocean. Very niche Haiku, Sara. Keep on writing! Gert

Christopher Higgins

Date: 8/14/2009 4:22:00 AM

Wonderful imagery with this haiku...I could just close my eyes and be transported.