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Wave, Water, Surf, Ocean, Sea, SprayCrab, Sea, Pollution, Death, Pollution

Great Ocean Great ocean you are mother of the earth whose span of quantum time is endless yet. With secrets buried deep within your surf your tidal moods are changed with day's sunset. Great ocean life springs forth within your bowels and yields a harvest for the world to see. So much could just be learned from fish and fouls the kinship that is boundless by decree. Great ocean you have power as an element, a thing which can’t be harnessed by a man. At times it is quite clearly evident as a storm at sea dictates at your command. Great ocean you are beautiful but sad. The world has dumped its garbage at your door. You are holding all the plastic that’s been had. Fish are eating it upon the ocean floor. Great Ocean praise your salted essence pure. Your might and darkest depths remain unknown. You are a God hand miracle for sure a wonderment of wonders all your own. 8/7/19 'STRAND CHOICE 7 Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Date: 1/27/2020 2:56:00 PM
Congrats on your honorable mention!;)
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Date: 8/16/2019 6:26:00 PM
Congratulations Janis on your podium finish!
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Janis Thompson
Date: 8/16/2019 7:26:00 PM
Thank you Jeanne.
Date: 8/16/2019 6:26:00 PM
Congratulations Janis on your podium finish!
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Janis Thompson
Date: 8/16/2019 7:27:00 PM
And thank you again, Janis.
Date: 8/16/2019 3:12:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Janis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Janis Thompson
Date: 8/16/2019 7:27:00 PM
Thanks Anne. Always a pleasure to hear from you.
Date: 8/15/2019 9:59:00 PM
Janis, congratulation on your wonderful win! Hugs
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Janis Thompson
Date: 8/16/2019 7:28:00 PM
Hugs back at you double. Thank you. Love, Janis
Date: 8/15/2019 4:26:00 PM
I adore this beautiful entry Janis. It is going into my faves! Your message concerning the environment 's beautifully expressed in this winning poem. I agree! Congratulations on your wonderful deserving podium win! : ) xxoo
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Janis Thompson
Date: 8/16/2019 7:29:00 PM
Love and hugs to you Connie. I appreciate the fave so much. Thanks a million for caring about the problem of our tortured ocean. Janis.
Date: 8/7/2019 1:08:00 PM
- A magnificent tribute to the sea, Janis :) - A poem that will score high on the winning list ... good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Janis Thompson
Date: 8/16/2019 7:29:00 PM
Thanks for the well wishes. They paid off.

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