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Great Majestic Ball

It's the evening of the year The great majestic ball. I go along trembling with fear No one will ask me to dance at all. The lights are blazing above The musicians strike up their chords In the eyes of some, shows expectant love, In others, time they can ill afford. The dance floor is polished to the hilt So the dancers can glide with ease. Some Scottish laddies dressed in highland kilt Serving wine and nibbles which will please. I sit amongst the ladies and their idle chatter The lights catching a glint of tiara-erred heads Note book clenched between sweating palms Dance spaces at the ready for any suitor to read A minuet is played, the ladies hold their partners hands Just a light touch from glove to glove The soft music emulates a wonderful sound, Stirring a thought or two towards love Back to my chair he gallantly leads me Bowing slightly as he helped me to sit Would you do me the honour, he asks, Let me fill in the vacant spaces in your list. I sit there dreamily thinking of what this might bring Is this the man to fulfil my needs. I then wake up with a start, as the kettle sings, To face my hungry family which I need to feed. Penned 15 November 2014

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Date: 12/26/2014 9:36:00 PM
SEREN, A beautiful and wonderful Ballroom Delight. Congrats on your win :) Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/25/2014 10:44:00 AM
I like your writing style; very charming. :) john.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/26/2014 3:53:00 PM
Thank you John ...Seren
Date: 12/17/2014 3:01:00 PM
Delighted to see you work on the winners list..Way to go..Sara
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/26/2014 3:53:00 PM
Thank you Sara, yes it is nice to see ones thoughts listed ....Seren
Date: 12/16/2014 3:09:00 PM
Your poem is so dreamy Serena. I adore your ending. Congratulations on your win.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/16/2014 11:56:00 PM
Thank you Brenda.....Seren
Date: 12/16/2014 12:08:00 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations Seren:-) hugs Jan xx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/16/2014 11:57:00 PM
Thanks Jan.....Seren
Date: 11/17/2014 10:42:00 PM
Well done and I like the twist....hugs Tim
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Seren Roberts
Date: 11/17/2014 10:45:00 PM
Thank you Tim, hope you are well.....Seren
Date: 11/17/2014 9:46:00 PM
This is excellent Seren, also a creative take on the challenge.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 11/17/2014 10:20:00 PM
Thx Maurice, was a nice subject to write about.....Seren
Date: 11/16/2014 11:15:00 PM
Loved the ending, great poem!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 11/17/2014 10:20:00 PM
Thx my friend....Seren
Date: 11/16/2014 7:18:00 PM
An outstanding poem dear Serene with such an unexpected ending !:.) Charma
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Seren Roberts
Date: 11/16/2014 9:23:00 PM
Thank you Char for stopping by....Seren
Date: 11/16/2014 5:26:00 PM
beautiful imagery Seren and I like the twist at the end:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 11/16/2014 5:37:00 PM
Thanks Jan......Seren

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