Great Majestic Ball

It's the evening of the year
The great majestic ball.
I go along trembling with fear
No one will ask me to dance at all.

The lights are blazing above
The musicians strike up their chords
In the eyes of some, shows expectant love, 
In others,  time they can ill afford.

The dance floor is polished to the hilt
So the dancers can glide with ease.
Some Scottish laddies dressed in highland kilt
Serving wine and nibbles which will please.

I sit amongst the ladies and their idle chatter
The lights catching a glint of tiara-erred heads
Note book clenched between sweating palms
Dance spaces  at the ready for any suitor to read

A minuet is played, the ladies hold their partners hands
Just a light touch from glove to glove
The soft music emulates a wonderful sound,
Stirring a thought or two towards love

Back to my chair he gallantly leads me
Bowing slightly as he helped me to sit
Would you do me the honour, he asks,
Let me fill in the vacant spaces in your list.

I sit there dreamily thinking of what this might bring
Is this the man to fulfil my needs.
I then wake up with a start, as the kettle sings,
To face my hungry family which I need to feed.



Penned 15 November 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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December 26, 2014 at 9:36 PM
SEREN, A beautiful and wonderful Ballroom Delight. Congrats on your win :) Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Fleming Avatar
December 25, 2014 at 10:44 AM
I like your writing style; very charming. :) john.
Roberts Avatar
December 26, 2014 at 3:53 PM
Thank you John ...Seren
Kendrick Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 3:01 PM
Delighted to see you work on the winners list..Way to go..Sara
Roberts Avatar
December 26, 2014 at 3:53 PM
Thank you Sara, yes it is nice to see ones thoughts listed ....Seren
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 3:09 PM
Your poem is so dreamy Serena. I adore your ending. Congratulations on your win.
Roberts Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 11:56 PM
Thank you Brenda.....Seren
Allison Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 12:08 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations Seren:-) hugs Jan xx
Roberts Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 11:57 PM
Thanks Jan.....Seren
Smith Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 10:42 PM
Well done and I like the twist....hugs Tim
Roberts Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 10:45 PM
Thank you Tim, hope you are well.....Seren
Yvonne Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 9:46 PM
This is excellent Seren, also a creative take on the challenge.
Roberts Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 10:20 PM
Thx Maurice, was a nice subject to write about.....Seren
Vaso Avatar
November 16, 2014 at 11:15 PM
Loved the ending, great poem!
Roberts Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 10:20 PM
Thx my friend....Seren
Chircop Avatar
November 16, 2014 at 7:18 PM
An outstanding poem dear Serene with such an unexpected ending !:.) Charma
Roberts Avatar
November 16, 2014 at 9:23 PM
Thank you Char for stopping by....Seren
Allison Avatar
November 16, 2014 at 5:26 PM
beautiful imagery Seren and I like the twist at the end:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Roberts Avatar
November 16, 2014 at 5:37 PM
Thanks Jan......Seren
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