Great Escape

GREAT ESCAPE
             
   
              Glorious Gibbous Moon glistening proud.
               Rambling releasing raising ripples of rays
               Enraptured sleepy starry sky in glaze.
               Assembled crowd of cotton cumulous cloud.
               Trembled Moon: Thunderbolt roaring aloud.
           
               Encompassed enveloping Moon so soon.
               Sky shivered as dark clouds strolled in platoon.
               Concealed Moon merged in morose morbid mood.
               Angry ambient acting rowdy rude.
               Push and pull of sudden storm burst to blow
               expelled chased clouds protecting Moon aglow.               

    01/14/20
                       Third Place
    'Great escape' Contest by John Hamilton
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Somadas Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 11:41 PM
Great imagery.. Congrats on your win for this wonderful poem Anisha..
Dutta Avatar
January 16, 2020 at 7:12 AM
thank Jenish. Love
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 3:33 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful podium win Anisha! xxoo
Dutta Avatar
January 16, 2020 at 7:12 AM
Thanks Connie. Love
Hamilton Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 2:26 PM
This is a great example of what I was looking for Anisha, lots of great imagery, congrats on a podium finish, and thanks for entering!
Krutsinger Avatar
January 14, 2020 at 12:12 PM
This is a wonderful entry for the contest, Anisha. Bravo!
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 14, 2020 at 11:52 AM
I like your entry very much Anisha. You need to put a space between Great and Escape to get a higher placement I would assume. I could be wrong. At any rate it is lovely. xxoo
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