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Great Escape

GREAT ESCAPE Glorious Gibbous Moon glistening proud. Rambling releasing raising ripples of rays Enraptured sleepy starry sky in glaze. Assembled crowd of cotton cumulous cloud. Trembled Moon: Thunderbolt roaring aloud. Encompassed enveloping Moon so soon. Sky shivered as dark clouds strolled in platoon. Concealed Moon merged in morose morbid mood. Angry ambient acting rowdy rude. Push and pull of sudden storm burst to blow expelled chased clouds protecting Moon aglow. 01/14/20 Third Place 'Great escape' Contest by John Hamilton

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Date: 1/15/2020 11:41:00 PM
Great imagery.. Congrats on your win for this wonderful poem Anisha..
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 1/16/2020 7:12:00 AM
thank Jenish. Love
Date: 1/15/2020 3:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful podium win Anisha! xxoo
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 1/16/2020 7:12:00 AM
Thanks Connie. Love
Date: 1/15/2020 2:26:00 PM
This is a great example of what I was looking for Anisha, lots of great imagery, congrats on a podium finish, and thanks for entering!
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Date: 1/14/2020 12:12:00 PM
This is a wonderful entry for the contest, Anisha. Bravo!
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Date: 1/14/2020 11:52:00 AM
I like your entry very much Anisha. You need to put a space between Great and Escape to get a higher placement I would assume. I could be wrong. At any rate it is lovely. xxoo
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