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Great Escape

G etting away from here, we have a plan. R eady, set, GO. Me and my man - E nveloped by twilight’s mist, now flee! A n island awaits us; we grab a boat; T o reach our paradise, we sail the sea. E vening melts into night of sapphire sky. S tars sparkle as close to the shore we float. C arefree are we! We’ve severed every tie A ttached to the mundane. Just he and I - P eaceful, yet passionately playful - E mbracing our “alone time,” on the sand we lie. Jan. 13, 2020

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Date: 1/19/2020 4:45:00 PM
Your delightful escape sounds heavenly. Awesome write Andrea, congrats on your win. Hugs
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Date: 1/15/2020 11:42:00 PM
Delightful escape.. Congrats on your win for this wonderful poem Andrea..
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Date: 1/15/2020 7:37:00 PM
Nice romantic getaway, Congrats on your win Andrea..
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Date: 1/15/2020 3:31:00 PM
I enjoyed your romantic tryst with your man Andrea. Congratulations on your podium win! xxoo
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Date: 1/15/2020 2:24:00 PM
This is a great write Andrea, with a very down to earth feel, I enjoyed this one very much, congrats on a podium finish, and thanks for entering!
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Date: 1/13/2020 6:03:00 PM
This made me reminisce about my youthful times on the beach Andrea. I loved it! : ) xxoo
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Date: 1/13/2020 5:39:00 PM
I can picture it and it is wonderful, relaxing and beautiful. I hope you are there now.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/14/2020 8:35:00 AM
yeah, right.... in my dreams
Date: 1/13/2020 5:35:00 PM
awesomely done as always. you rock..
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Date: 1/13/2020 1:07:00 PM
Your poem reads like a beautiful dream, Andrea. Bet you wish you were on the island with Joe right now! Best wishes in the contest. Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 1/13/2020 10:06:00 AM
Sounds bliss Andrea, enjoy every minute. Good luck. Tom
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Date: 1/13/2020 8:40:00 AM
A charming escape you wrote Andrea--enjoyed reading about your romantic solitude for two--beautifully expressed.
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