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Gray Clouds Roaming

I hear a rustling in the leaves As the wind huffs and heaves A storm is coming ever near A rustling in the leaves I hear Gray clouds roam across the sky Some leaves swirl up on high Thunder rumbles in the dome Across the sky gray clouds roam The rain will fall for a while And make the land more fertile Flowers seem to love it all For a while the rain will fall A rainbow shows its many hues As the sky regains its blues A pot of gold are at the end of those Its many hues a rainbow shows 9-7-2022

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Date: 10/4/2022 2:31:00 PM
I like your swap quatrain. It has good flow, and your swap lines are excellent. Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for your visits to my page. Sara
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Date: 9/10/2022 8:19:00 AM
Hi Joseph what s lovely poem my friend. I can actually smell the rain coming and see the rainbow in the sky, so well penned hope you are well. Hugs and blessings Jennifer
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Date: 9/8/2022 1:25:00 PM
Nicely done Joseph. You've turned those phrases well :) Linda
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Date: 9/8/2022 2:11:00 AM
After the storm we all admire the rainbow, Clever.
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Date: 9/7/2022 6:33:00 PM
Yes, the rain does fall, and the "flowers seem to love it all." Me too. :) There's something so exciting about a thunderstorm, as long as it doesn't cause any damage. I love everything about the rain, especially seeing a rainbow. I wish to place this in my favorites. You have expressed this so beautifully, my dear friend. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 9/7/2022 3:19:00 PM
Joseph, a beautiful poem, sometimes we just need the rain, well done, peace and tranquility ~ ( I sent you a soupmail)
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Date: 9/7/2022 1:46:00 PM
Onset of storm and the rainbow after--well done depiction of hues in this swap quatrain, Joseph. Best to you.
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