Gravity

celestial force … attraction that moves bodies towards each other Penned 23/05/2014

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/23/2014 5:53:00 PM

Seren, thank you once again..PD

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/9/2014 8:58:00 PM

I agree this should have placed higher, I love it too, but grats on making it on the list :) you are awesome :)

Seren Roberts
Date: 7/9/2014 9:08:00 PM

Thank you Casarah for stopping by to congrat. Me .....Seren

Tim Smith

Date: 7/9/2014 8:12:00 PM

I really like this one Seren...It should have placed higher...congrats...Tim

Seren Roberts
Date: 7/9/2014 9:06:00 PM

Thanks Tim. I just about made it was last on list I think. It's how the judge viewed it, there was an excellent entry ....Seren

Paul Callus

Date: 7/9/2014 6:16:00 AM

Congratulations, Seren! enjoyed your celestial force that has such an 'attractive' power....maybe in love, too! // paul

Seren Roberts
Date: 7/9/2014 9:09:00 PM

Thanks Paul Glad you enjoyed it ...Seren

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/8/2014 11:26:00 PM

Seren, love the win....PD

Seren Roberts
Date: 7/9/2014 12:29:00 AM

Thanks Linda ....Seren

Arlene Smith

Date: 7/8/2014 8:56:00 PM

Congrats on a beautiful win, Seren my friend.. Hugs.. Arlene

Seren Roberts
Date: 7/9/2014 12:29:00 AM

Many thx Arlene ....Seren

Faye Gibson

Date: 7/8/2014 5:59:00 PM

Congratulations, Seren. Very beautifully done.

Seren Roberts
Date: 7/9/2014 12:30:00 AM

Hello Faye, thanks for stopping by....Seren

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/8/2014 4:02:00 PM

I liked the deeper meaning in yours, Seren. Congrats on the winners' list.

Seren Roberts
Date: 7/9/2014 12:30:00 AM

Hi Andrea, thank you.....Seren

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/8/2014 11:26:00 AM

Congratulations, Seren for a beautiful write and for a fine win!

Seren Roberts
Date: 7/9/2014 12:31:00 AM

Pandita hello....thanks for the congrats ....Seren

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/8/2014 2:35:00 AM

Wonderful n magnetic Seren! Loved this read,, congrats on big win!

Seren Roberts
Date: 7/9/2014 12:28:00 AM

Dr Upma glad you liked it ....Seren

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/8/2014 12:46:00 AM

Meaningful and thought provoking practical approach, seren. congrats on the win

Seren Roberts
Date: 7/9/2014 12:28:00 AM

Thanks Ram ....Seren

Skat A

Date: 7/7/2014 9:18:00 PM

Seren, Congratulations, Thank you for the awesome haiku. Enjoy my -Most Recent Blog Post if you like. ""Super Blind - Super Quick..."" Love SKAT

Seren Roberts
Date: 7/7/2014 10:23:00 PM

Thank you Skat...... Seren

Wayland Bunch

Date: 5/28/2014 5:41:00 AM

Nice haiku Seren, I really enjoy it.

Seren Roberts
Date: 5/28/2014 5:48:00 AM

Hi Wayland thanks for stopping by and commenting ...Seren

Andy Richards

Date: 5/23/2014 9:32:00 PM

who needs Einstein equations.. You nailed it in three lines! nice..

Seren Roberts
Date: 5/23/2014 9:44:00 PM

thank you Andy .....Seren

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/23/2014 8:07:00 PM

I like what Carolyn told you below my comment. How this poem could also be titled Love!!! Nice one, seren.

Seren Roberts
Date: 5/23/2014 9:44:00 PM

Thanks Andrea......2 for the price of one...lol...Seren

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/23/2014 4:24:00 PM

A very intellectual view of "Gravity," Seren. There must be a new contest out as I'm seeing many people write about gravity. You know, your poem could also be titled "Love" and the meaning would be totally different. Wishing you success. Love, Carolyn

Seren Roberts
Date: 5/23/2014 9:43:00 PM

I will remember that Carolyn, thanks for your comments....Seren

David Williams

Date: 5/23/2014 2:10:00 PM

Hi Seren I like the image of this...David

Seren Roberts
Date: 5/23/2014 9:42:00 PM

thanks David .....Seren

John Lawless

Date: 5/23/2014 11:58:00 AM

Alas, many of us fail to realize the gravity of the situation. I like the idea of gravity as a gentle nudge in the right direction. Nice take on the theme.

Seren Roberts
Date: 5/23/2014 12:28:00 PM

Thank you John for stopping by......Seren

Jake Ponce

Date: 5/23/2014 10:41:00 AM

I'm going to have to say that gravity and love really do dance well together and that's what I felt in your haiku. :)

Seren Roberts
Date: 5/23/2014 12:27:00 PM

Thank you Jake, Haiku isn't my forte, but I will always try......Seren