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Graveyard

I'd heard that they were unpleasant A place no one wants to go Unattractive and shadowy But for me that isn't so I used to skip through the gravestones With interest not fear Looking at the words Telling of who resides right here Saddened by short times on earth Or couples kept apart Some for 50 years or more But still kept in the others heart The epitaph so humble Of those that have lived and died Wive, mothers, fathers brothers Those they lived alongside Then there's the resting place of those Who couldn't afford the cost Laid to rest with many others Eventually those graves are lost So they are not just sad places They are evidence of the past These people loved and remembered Until there's no one left to ask Writing Challenge - G Words - Poetry Contest 21st February 2023 Sponsored by: Constance La France 2nd place

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Date: 3/2/2023 12:10:00 AM
Dilly, wonderfully penned, I find graveyards quite peaceful, and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - G Words, well done, blessings, Constance
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Date: 3/2/2023 1:01:00 AM
Thank you Constance, I've always liked them too
Date: 2/25/2023 11:30:00 AM
- Described as peaceful and beautiful, D.D. :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 2/25/2023 11:41:00 AM
Thank you Sunshine for your kind comments. I'm glad you enjoyed it
Date: 2/24/2023 7:45:00 PM
"they are not just sad places They are evidence of the past" - beautiful definition of the graveyard. Great work. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/24/2023 11:01:00 PM
Thank you so much for your comment. Much appreciated. Glad you liked it :)
Date: 2/24/2023 1:03:00 PM
Big congratulations on your contest podium win, Dilly. Your poem is so deserving of such recognition.
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Date: 2/24/2023 1:09:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words
Date: 2/21/2023 9:03:00 AM
Dilly this is just... well for me, perfect. Everything you said beautifully describes a cemetery. For me too it was a peaceful place to be.
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Date: 2/21/2023 9:07:00 AM
Any weather resonates with a mood. I don't really think about below ground, more energy and history. Thank you for your kind comment
Date: 2/21/2023 8:02:00 AM
Different angle, poignant and sweet. Love the last line!
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Date: 2/21/2023 8:07:00 AM
Thank you Margarita - I've attempted almost all the current contests. They've certainly been a mixed bag!

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