Grappling

Eleanor feels her strength ebb
               like a river dried by heat
she sinks to the hospital floor
chemotherapy stalks her, 
               sometimes weakens her resolve
                                    breaks her like a fireball
staff support her, lift her to a chair
          offer the stale ugliness of words: "Get tough girl!"

Regaining ground, she jokes to name her rebel cells:
          "Curly, Larry and Moe"
           malformed bits that divide, spread, 
           growth grotesque
Cancer's aerial roots like ivy adhering to the human stems
                                                                               of hope

Her diagnosis snared her well ordered life,
         hoisted sails of hospital gowns to blunt her vision
Blood samples, lab tests, IV's, rays that X her soul
         a restless swirl
         to solve the puzzle
         to sculpt her body whole
         what she wishes
as Eleanor holds promise tight
         grim jawed
         in an ordeal that steals her essence
         a train that chugs and shudders
         her search beyond the rails






Poem composed: June 21, 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Krutsinger Avatar
July 17, 2021 at 3:47 AM
You have certainly known someone who has been through chemo."Blood samples, lab tests, IV's, rays that X her soul a restless swirl to solve the puzzle to sculpt her body whole" Wow!
Sambourne Avatar
August 1, 2021 at 7:35 PM
Thank you, Caren. I appreciate your affirmative comment. Be well. Best wishes, Brian
Alex Avatar
July 1, 2021 at 7:22 PM
a restless swirl Beautiful. Congratulations!
Sambourne Avatar
July 1, 2021 at 7:37 PM
My appreciation for your congratulatory note, Christuraj. I hope that you are well + writing still with flair. Best wishes, Brian
Mcconnell Avatar
June 24, 2021 at 7:53 AM
A fine piece very well-penned Brian, speaking with imagery and a strong voice. take care and keep spilling your ink!
Sambourne Avatar
June 24, 2021 at 10:41 AM
Many thanks, Gordon, for your encouraging note. May we all find reasons to write for years to come. Sincerely, Brian
Lamoureux Avatar
June 24, 2021 at 6:25 AM
What a nice thing to say. Thanks Brian.
Sambourne Avatar
June 24, 2021 at 7:23 AM
Write on, buddy. Let the muse take us where she will. Thank you for the stop by. Cheers, Brian
Lamoureux Avatar
June 23, 2021 at 6:54 AM
You have a significant voice. I was also impressed with your first poem. Thanks for your visit and comments. Blessings Rick.
Sambourne Avatar
June 23, 2021 at 8:29 AM
Greetings Richard, Thank you for your supportive words. I am enjoying discovering various fine voices on Poetry Soup + yours is a strong one. All the best, Brian
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