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Grandpa's Weathered Red Barn

Grandpa’s rustic, once crimson red barn sheltered so much and so many different things From biting bitter cold, to cyclonic winds, and hard-drenching-down-pouring rains… Great memories lie heaped, buried in antique red rubble and sifted gray ash Decaying on open flat grassy plain along with the historic Civil War past… The red barn was where I learned about his cranky, short tempered, milking cow Never wander too close to hind legs for they will surely send you tumbling down… The weathered red barn held fabulous hiding places for rodents, snakes, and me I know its brave red heart protected me from countless accidents and waiting dangers… I acquired great joy sliding down its majestic shingled low-sloping roof Continuously riding into insidiously giant pillow-soft snow drifts… Sacred memories of childhood absorbed in knot holes and immense pillared rafters Echoing in the attached silo and milk room where laughter gathered non-stop… Along the country roadside, down a pot-hole filled gravel dirt road, were neighboring farms But not one barn could match the strength or beauty of Grandpa’s weathered red barn… Copyright © 2010 By Caryl S. Muzzey Fifth Place Winner ~ "That Old Red Barn” Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Rick Parise Dec. 10, 2010

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Date: 3/24/2017 7:03:00 PM
I love the memories recorded here. I also remember the barn, although not red, but great memories all-the-same.
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Date: 12/13/2010 10:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Caryl in Rick's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/12/2010 6:30:00 AM
Many congratulations Caryl on your fine win with this lovely poem >> James :)
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Date: 12/11/2010 7:09:00 PM
wonderful entry , congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 12/11/2010 4:40:00 PM
Outstanding description, this contest entry of a barn with a "brave red heart" Congratulations in this contest, Caryl! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 12/11/2010 9:35:00 AM
Never wander too close to hind legs for they will surely send you tumbling down. Congratulations Caryl on your worthy poem's honor. Smile, I have had some experience with those cranky cows too! Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/11/2010 6:03:00 AM
Congrats Caryl on your big win in Rick's contest with this elegant write and win my friend.. enjoy your top spot for a wonderful poem... happy weekend and happy holidays with luv..
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Date: 12/11/2010 4:53:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Red barn
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Date: 12/10/2010 11:22:00 PM
congrats here for this winner, enjoyed, Harry
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Date: 12/10/2010 11:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this terrific entry to Rick's contest, Caryl!
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Date: 11/2/2010 3:07:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this vivid and moving word picture. Best of luck in the contest. Steve
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Date: 11/1/2010 10:24:00 PM
gosh, you make it sound like it all really happened to you. But I doubt many of us grew up on a farm like this! (or possibly you did?) Anyway, I think this is one of the best ones I read in the red barn contest category. HOpe you place high. LUv, Andrea
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Caryl Muzzey
Date: 1/2/2016 2:53:00 PM
The only thing different was that it was a white barn, I made it red for the contest...
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Caryl Muzzey
Date: 1/2/2016 2:52:00 PM
Andrea, this really did happen to me, all at 4 years of age. I was watching my dad do some milking and got too close to Rosie's back legs and was kicked in the stomach. Then when we had a big snow, my brother helped me to get on the barn roof and told me to slide down into the giant snow drift that came up level with the roof slope which was about 5 ft. from the ground. My dad had to dig me out... But we had fun!
Date: 11/1/2010 7:57:00 PM
Outstanding entry, Caryl. Great tribute and fond memories. Enjoyed. Good luck. Thanks for reading my stuff. Ralph
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Date: 10/31/2010 11:52:00 AM
I can see why this barn is so special to you, Caryl. When I first saw Rick's contest posted, I didn't know what the entries would be like. But yours is very moving and descriptive. Best wishes for success! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/30/2010 12:11:00 PM
A really terrific read.Wishing you luck in the contest.Thanks for the congrats on my win.Teresa
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Date: 10/30/2010 11:29:00 AM
Good luck in the contest with this one..Winners' circle for sure..Reads like it was a great place to play..Sara
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Date: 10/30/2010 9:08:00 AM
Very beautiful... I liked the smell in my grandad's barn... esp when he had cows.
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Date: 10/13/2010 8:25:00 AM
Lovely poem of memories,I enjoyed it very much and thank you for comments on my poem.
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Date: 10/12/2010 1:01:00 AM
excellent couplets, enjoyed this, good luck in the contest. Harry
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Date: 10/11/2010 5:44:00 PM
Love the images
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