Grandpa

Grandpa

a kind face
 
skin leathery and creased from years of working in the sun
 
long jowls like a basset hounds
 
sad droplet eyes
 
always a slight aroma of beer
 
brown wrinkled callous palms
 
dirt-stained fingernails were evidence of an old man’s toil
 
a blue plaid shirt now ashen from wear 

a tall man
 
always unshaven with scrapes of gray hair that would scratch you un-mercifully if he asked for a hug
 
he walked with shoulders hung and bowed over as if broken
 
that of a man who had known the burdens of inequality all his life

the kindness in his eyes reflected a graceful acceptance of his fate
 
his tears masked a rage and unforgiveness for the destiny of his children
 
late afternoons he would sit out yonder under a huge black gum tree
 
a blackened wood briar pipe a pack of red man chewing tobacco and a can of snuff beside him
 
one jaw always popped out as the tobacco had to sit just long enough before it was time to spit
 
he would sit in that shaded spot for hours on end
 
up till sunset most days
 
always staring intently at something out there
 
was it memories from his past
 
or perhaps the dreams of a past that someone stole
 
eventually, grandma would call out to him
 
Henry where you be?
 
he would always reply
 
after awhile
 
I’m just there…
 
I never understood what that meant before
 
Until now
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Cornwall Avatar
March 20, 2022 at 11:48 AM
I loved this and could feel the sadness and the rage! My Grandfather and his brothers were playing with matches when he was 7 or 8 and they burnt the house down which killed their sister. I can still hear my GreatGranfather arguing and fighting with him as they drank blaming him still 60 years later!Bravo
Brown  Avatar
March 17, 2022 at 11:06 AM
Reminds me of my grandfather. I miss him so much. Amazing poem!
Thayer Avatar
September 10, 2018 at 7:34 PM
Gabrielle, You Are A Very Talented Writer! I Felt Like I Was Right There. Your Grandfather Sounded A Lot, Like Mine. Thanks For Sharing Such Beautiful Memories. Vickie
Ashley Avatar
September 7, 2018 at 11:00 PM
Wow! I was completely captivated and held spellbound by the threads you wove so poignantly, powerfully yet delicately, into this deep, rich, stunning portrait of Henry, your grandfather.. intimate, beautiful poetry, Gabrielle, whose tender verses will linger in my consciousness.. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Jordan Avatar
September 7, 2018 at 11:46 PM
Susan, it was deeply personal and I thank you for seeing him. Blessings!
Wolf Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 10:56 PM
I can visualize every bit of every scene you have laid out here, Gabrielle. You truly introduced me to your grandfather here. Excellent! ~ Gershon
Sharp Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 8:03 AM
Very poignant, and expressed with great care and depth.
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