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Grandmothers Rocking Chair







I still see her in her white rocking chair.
Sharp hearing and her once, sharp vision going.
Rocking, dreaming of her grandchildren growing.
Their toys, left abandoned, at which with love, she stares.


Her heart broken from painful emptiness!
Those days of hugs and love, forever gone.
When, with those grandchildren, singing songs.
If only their pictures, brought back such happiness.


She knows full well these days are her very last.
She is a delicate shell, abandoned on life’s shore.
To her family, she’s a huge burden and more.
Midnight Angels carried her to where she would be 
wanted, at long last!

                                1/8/2023

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kiser Avatar
January 20, 2023 at 3:52 PM
Sad, we hold onto the memories that are the best; we miss them, but we all go through those feelings.
Romios Avatar
January 20, 2023 at 4:19 PM
OK! Panagiota
Roper Avatar
January 15, 2023 at 9:19 AM
So heartbreaking verse, yet so very true.. Many elderly sit alone; where are the children they raised? Wait until it comes around to them. I am very fortuned my children check up on me at all times and a brother & sister in-law that live next door. Loves and hugs my friend on this Sunday moring.
Romios Avatar
January 20, 2023 at 4:25 PM
Just be you. That’s great. Panagiota
Roper Avatar
January 17, 2023 at 1:32 AM
I am not entering very many contest, just don't know what to say. I see the expectations of the host and I am totally lost.
Romios Avatar
January 15, 2023 at 2:20 PM
I don’t know, Eve! Families leave the elderly to fend for themselves? Righto! What goes around, comes around! My daughter works from home at my house. I am blessed to have her here daily. She’s a sweetheart, even makes lunch! Lucky you have relatives right next door. Cool. PS great that you are winning contests. Yaaa! Happy Sunday, from my house to yours. Panagiota
Eagle Avatar
January 12, 2023 at 8:28 PM
A lovely poem. Your creativity is a true gift.
Romios Avatar
January 13, 2023 at 12:42 AM
Nice you read more than one!! I liked this piem. And the chair picture, thanks Panagiota
Andresen Avatar
January 11, 2023 at 6:57 AM
- A beautiful poem that evokes fond memories of grandmother, dear Pangie :) - hugs
Romios Avatar
January 11, 2023 at 7:26 AM
Sunshine, You always consistently touch my soul I appreciate our long friendship here and your….magnificent poetic presentations, Besides that you are so real and humble! What more could I want! Nothing. You fill my heart! Loyally, Panagiota, *******Each visit ,….a blessing! )))))))))))*****
Wolf Avatar
January 9, 2023 at 9:44 PM
I'm all for life until 120! Of whatever 'quality.' We are all here for a reason, just like Grandmother's chair... Quite a haunting write, my friend! ~ Gershon
Romios Avatar
January 10, 2023 at 6:56 AM
Good morning Gershon!. Thank you for reading this,..there are others, here….like you…Long Life Club! I wish that for you! Such a quality of brilliance you bring to this planet, with your Humility, warmth and intelligence! Glad you appreciated this write! In apprecciation, Panagiota
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January 9, 2023 at 11:21 AM
Hello Panagiota, a grandmother loves her grandchildren. It is sad when they pass. Hugs. xxx/Darlene.
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 10, 2023 at 11:00 AM
Hello Panagiota, yes you have all those memories of Eddie in his younger days. Yes he did keep you busy. Nothing wrong being sentimental. Hugs Darlene/ xxx
Romios Avatar
January 9, 2023 at 11:48 AM
I’d agree they are! But as a grandmother, I truly miss all the fun, Eddie and I had.he kept me young!)) I am sentimental… Appreciatively, Panagiota
Hinshaw Avatar
January 8, 2023 at 4:48 PM
Beautiful, Pangie. It reflects the life and plight of many of us - Bob
Romios Avatar
January 9, 2023 at 11:45 AM
Your support of a mood is poet is appreciated. Forgot to tell you that. Hugs, Panagiota
Romios Avatar
January 8, 2023 at 7:24 PM
Thank you well said,, PR
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