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Premiere Contest WinnerGrandmother's Hands

I will not forget,
my grandmother's gentle, loving, gnarled touch;
those hands that I loved so very much,
not a day spent with her I will regret.
          We made chocolate cake,
            our best dessert to make;
and we liked sad movies though we got upset,
those old, old hands would reach out for me;
        her grasp a plea . . . 

        I have a memory dear,
of grandma holding me to her beating heart;
when death came and my sister had to depart,
stroking my hair until my tears would disappear.
          And when grandpa died,
            we hugged and cried;
I watched her hands grow more fragile each year,
like a twisted road map of her tangled life;
       her death hit like a knife . . . 

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April 28, 2018


Poetry/Rhyme/Grandmother's Hands
Copyright Protected, ID 18- 1017-836-01
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym


Written for Jamie's Interesting Contest
sponsor, Jamie Pan, (Theme #5, Elements #2)

First Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Jayasankar Avatar
March 27, 2021 at 10:26 AM
A poem so touching and sad Constance... Am reminded of my own grandmother... Nothing like the love of parents, and grandparents... Hugs.. ~ Ani
La France Avatar
March 27, 2021 at 12:35 PM
Ani, you picked an old fav or mine to read today, not a day goes by that I do not think of my dear Grandma, she lived to 94, but could not walk or talk or recognize anyone- she did not know my name but she called me angel, hugs _Constance
Gentry Avatar
August 25, 2018 at 1:31 PM
Congratulations on your win. Enjoyed reading.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 23, 2018 at 3:11 AM
Congratulations on your great win, Dear Heart.
Gauthier Avatar
August 22, 2018 at 8:52 PM
SO very touching, Dear Heart. Moved to tears. A definite FAVE for me. Congrats on your most deserving gold medal win.
Waters Avatar
August 22, 2018 at 3:36 PM
Deep and loving tribute beautifully penned. Congratulations on first place. Love always = V
Richards Avatar
August 22, 2018 at 2:48 PM
I had a grandmother that I loved like this, Constance. What a lovely tribute to yours! Congratulations!
Haight Avatar
August 22, 2018 at 2:33 PM
Such a lovely tribute to your dear Grandmother, Dear Heart. It reminds me of my own so many years ago...a bond that stays with you always. Well-done, and congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
Pan Avatar
August 22, 2018 at 10:46 AM
Very well written poem, congrats on the win Constance! regards, Jamie :)
Wigley Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 3:08 AM
Deeply moving, but with a nice seam of love running through it, and beautifully writ. Good luck in the contest, Constance. Viv x
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