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I will not forget, my grandmother's gentle, loving, gnarled touch; those hands that I loved so very much, not a day spent with her I will regret. We made chocolate cake, our best dessert to make; and we liked sad movies though we got upset, those old, old hands would reach out for me; her grasp a plea . . . I have a memory dear, of grandma holding me to her beating heart; when death came and my sister had to depart, stroking my hair until my tears would disappear. And when grandpa died, we hugged and cried; I watched her hands grow more fragile each year, like a twisted road map of her tangled life; her death hit like a knife . . . ______________________ April 28, 2018 Poetry/Rhyme/Grandmother's Hands Copyright Protected, ID 18- 1017-836-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym Written for Jamie's Interesting Contest sponsor, Jamie Pan, (Theme #5, Elements #2) First Place

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Date: 3/27/2021 10:26:00 AM
A poem so touching and sad Constance... Am reminded of my own grandmother... Nothing like the love of parents, and grandparents... Hugs.. ~ Ani
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Constance La France
Date: 3/27/2021 12:35:00 PM
Ani, you picked an old fav or mine to read today, not a day goes by that I do not think of my dear Grandma, she lived to 94, but could not walk or talk or recognize anyone- she did not know my name but she called me angel, hugs _Constance
Date: 8/25/2018 1:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Enjoyed reading.
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Date: 8/23/2018 3:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your great win, Dear Heart.
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Date: 8/22/2018 8:52:00 PM
SO very touching, Dear Heart. Moved to tears. A definite FAVE for me. Congrats on your most deserving gold medal win.
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Date: 8/22/2018 3:36:00 PM
Deep and loving tribute beautifully penned. Congratulations on first place. Love always = V
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Date: 8/22/2018 2:48:00 PM
I had a grandmother that I loved like this, Constance. What a lovely tribute to yours! Congratulations!
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Date: 8/22/2018 2:33:00 PM
Such a lovely tribute to your dear Grandmother, Dear Heart. It reminds me of my own so many years ago...a bond that stays with you always. Well-done, and congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 8/22/2018 10:46:00 AM
Very well written poem, congrats on the win Constance! regards, Jamie :)
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Date: 4/29/2018 3:08:00 AM
Deeply moving, but with a nice seam of love running through it, and beautifully writ. Good luck in the contest, Constance. Viv x
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