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Grandma's Tin Cans

As lamplight flicks on the side table Grandma tends a pan of lukewarm water, And moves into the room toward the bed Wishing my fever would cool down sooner . Her hand clutches old tin cans, quite dented And pours out ginger oil, raspberry in a bowl With vaporous mix of weed as fire reddens... The brew, the potion simmers on a tray While she chants chants this ailment out the door. How the frames open wide to drink the evening Of mystic Moon.... Grandma's power dressed in light: Fingers that once were silky and young Brush my forehead, as though to soothe the quiver. Until sips of this ancient elixir clear the air While she murmurs thanks...embers ablaze. Gradually, I find deep relief from such alchemy; Wise woman's gift, healing cans from her secret bin. Contest of john lawless : Dented Cans 1/9/2018

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Date: 4/19/2018 10:30:00 PM
Such an awesome take on the challenge, nette. Congrats on your most deserved podium finish.
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Date: 1/14/2018 8:24:00 AM
Congratulations! Wonderful penning Nette, an absolute winner. I love it.
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Date: 1/13/2018 8:09:00 PM
Nice one Nette enjoyed reading.
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Date: 1/13/2018 4:40:00 PM
Many congrats on your win Nette:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/13/2018 12:14:00 PM
...AH, Nette, the bread and whatever she put on it poultice wrap....holistic medicine before it became mainstream. A wonderful take on the theme - thanks for participating in the contest
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Date: 1/9/2018 10:20:00 AM
it's so fun to read what everyone is writing for this contest, all the different takes on 'dented cans'- you wrote outstandingly, good luck! ;)-luloo
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Date: 1/9/2018 6:12:00 AM
Great poem for the contest Nette...
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Date: 1/8/2018 3:31:00 PM
It's wonderful to read how you reacted to the loving hands of your grandmother, with her dented can, and strong will to heal you...I liked it...
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Date: 1/8/2018 1:52:00 PM
This reminds me of ancient healing the way medicine men would cure people. Impressed by the magical mood of your poem; yes, enchanting!
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Date: 1/8/2018 1:37:00 PM
A joyful story of grandma's love and beliefs---artfully intertwined with tin cans filled with relief..well written, nette..best for a win.
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Date: 1/8/2018 1:30:00 PM
- Grandmother is wise and knows exactly what she is doing - Lovely poem, Nette - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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