Grandma At the Track

GRANDMA AT THE TRACK

foolishly
i threw the rock
and appeared
to hopscotch 
until the ill of my ankle
violently mocked

i chalk it all up
to forget me nots

my mind over knees
ignores
the rusty gears 
as my wrinkled hand
avoids resistance 
hovering a half inch
above the bannister -
safe.

now i watch youngsters skate.
those whipper snappers
with the gait of a purebred horse.

i huddle with my overloaded purse
carrying 3 cell phones and mine,
a roll of ticket winnings,
leftover candy,

then i
chase my four-year old grandson
‘round the outskirts
as he weaves between strangers
taking my heart with him.

mind you,
the thoroughbreds
are resting soundly
on the bench.

4/25/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Romios Avatar
May 29, 2019 at 3:36 PM
Wonderful contrasts. panagiota....
Rodrigues Avatar
May 29, 2019 at 6:15 PM
Thank you, Panagiota!
Wolf Avatar
April 28, 2019 at 9:02 AM
So evocative, and yes - a tad provocative as well...But I just cannot believe the grandma is you. No way. Must be you are writing of someone else. You are forever young in my mind... Great poem, Kim! Best wishes, gw
Rodrigues Avatar
April 28, 2019 at 12:00 PM
Thanks, Gershon!
Kiser Avatar
April 26, 2019 at 5:15 PM
Those are the priceless moments of our lives; exhausting but, priceless. Well done.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 26, 2019 at 8:22 PM
Thank you :)
Onclaud Avatar
April 25, 2019 at 4:08 PM
too much jumping hormones... charming read for a sweet grammy sitter!...enjoyed this, kim...huggs
Rodrigues Avatar
April 25, 2019 at 4:39 PM
Thank you, Nette! xx
Cunningham Avatar
April 25, 2019 at 9:46 AM
Don't they wear you out, I take it you've been child minding this week Precious moments though. Tom.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 25, 2019 at 10:33 AM
Couple weeks ago...during Spring break :)
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