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Grandma At the Track

GRANDMA AT THE TRACK foolishly i threw the rock and appeared to hopscotch until the ill of my ankle violently mocked i chalk it all up to forget me nots my mind over knees ignores the rusty gears as my wrinkled hand avoids resistance hovering a half inch above the bannister - safe. now i watch youngsters skate. those whipper snappers with the gait of a purebred horse. i huddle with my overloaded purse carrying 3 cell phones and mine, a roll of ticket winnings, leftover candy, then i chase my four-year old grandson ‘round the outskirts as he weaves between strangers taking my heart with him. mind you, the thoroughbreds are resting soundly on the bench. 4/25/2019

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Date: 5/29/2019 3:36:00 PM
Wonderful contrasts. panagiota....
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/29/2019 6:15:00 PM
Thank you, Panagiota!
Date: 4/28/2019 9:02:00 AM
So evocative, and yes - a tad provocative as well...But I just cannot believe the grandma is you. No way. Must be you are writing of someone else. You are forever young in my mind... Great poem, Kim! Best wishes, gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/28/2019 12:00:00 PM
Thanks, Gershon!
Date: 4/26/2019 5:15:00 PM
Those are the priceless moments of our lives; exhausting but, priceless. Well done.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/26/2019 8:22:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 4/25/2019 4:08:00 PM
too much jumping hormones... charming read for a sweet grammy sitter!...enjoyed this, kim...huggs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/25/2019 4:39:00 PM
Thank you, Nette! xx
Date: 4/25/2019 9:46:00 AM
Don't they wear you out, I take it you've been child minding this week Precious moments though. Tom.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/25/2019 10:33:00 AM
Couple weeks ago...during Spring break :)

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