Grandma

I barely knew the grandma on my father’s side, but Grandma Owens I knew fairly well. She was my mother’s mother; she took great pride in cooking us up dinners that were swell. We’d all come running when her food we’d smell. I don’t know much about when she was young, the names of all her siblings or how many of them she was raised among. Her name was Doris, and she bore five children (of daughter there were four). I never really got to know her when she had the bloom of youth upon her face. My mom divorced, and I met Grandma then because Mom took us back home to the place - the farm where she’d grown up – her roots there to retrace. About two years I lived there at the farm where Grandpa milked his cows and worked in a big field. There was a yellow house and big red barn. I liked it there, but not too much appealed to me about my grandmother. She kept so much concealed. She had no great relationship with me or with my sisters (anyway, if she did, I can't recall). Her real authentic self I failed to see, and most of what I knew of her at all were things my mother told me. That info was so small. Her cooking in the kitchen, a woman gray and stout, is how I think or her, and always she seemed old. Few hugs she gave to me, but without a doubt, she was a thrifty woman, or so I had been told, She’d been a nurse for babies! So odd this seemed for one so cold. When Grandpa died, my grandma was a go-getter. She lived in an apartment. Then she lost a lot of weight! I visited her sometimes and got to know her better. I’m practical like Grandma was. That’s one thing I learned late. She was a godly woman too. Hope she’s there right now at Heaven’s Gate. Feb. 23, 2023 for Writing Challenge - G Words - Poetry Contest (grandma) Sponsor: Constance La France
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Date: 3/1/2023 11:15:00 PM
Andrea, beautiful grandma poem and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - G Words, well done, blessings, Constance
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Date: 2/26/2023 11:22:00 AM
Sober ~ stoic ~ reserve ~ equanimity ~ temperate . . . and of necessity - frugal or economic as their adage: "Waste not want not" would be their call to prayer or equally, their call to arms.
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Date: 2/26/2023 10:12:00 AM
Ahh!! Congratulations on your first place winner in this one. Glad you got to know her better even if it was in her golden years. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 2/25/2023 10:44:00 AM
- A lovely poem about grandma... (missing my grandma and grandpa:) - Congratulations on your top first place in the contest, Andrea :) - hugs
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Date: 2/24/2023 8:28:00 PM
You wrote all that you knew about your grandma, Andrea, a realistic poem:) congratulations:)
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Date: 2/24/2023 7:20:00 PM
A grand poem on grandma. "Hope she’s there right now at Heaven’s Gate" - ended with great hope. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/24/2023 6:41:00 PM
My great grandma sure like to cook and made sure we ate : ). Amazing how alot of families evolve around those loving grandmas trying to keep the family together, great poem and story , May God bless, comfort, guide and fill you with His peace, love, spirit and joy in abundance
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Date: 2/24/2023 6:01:00 PM
I enjoyed reading about your Grandma Andrea :-) I only knew my grandparents on my Dad's side, but like your grandma, my grandma also took pride in cooking and made sure everyone was well fed and looked after, but she wasn't very demonstrative with hugs and didn't share much about herself. I think due to her own upbringing. Congratulations on your top win :-)
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Date: 2/24/2023 3:25:00 PM
A very sweet write for getting to know your grandma. Congratulations on your win Andrea! :)
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Date: 2/24/2023 2:06:00 PM
That's so lovely and sweet, Andrea. I'm glad you finally got to know her. :) And big congratulations on big win!
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Date: 2/24/2023 1:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful story/write. Great memories are the best. You Have some great ones here. Have a great/blessed day writing away........................
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Date: 2/24/2023 1:07:00 PM
AWESOME write! Love it. Your grandma was probably amazing like you are - I knew my grandparents (most of them) really well. They were with me more than my parents most of the time. Love this, sweet friend. Congrats and God bless you, Love, Gina
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Date: 2/24/2023 4:59:00 AM
Excellent poetry. Wonderful Thoughts and recollections, Andrea. Sincere best wishes for the contest. Blessings
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Date: 2/24/2023 12:56:00 AM
What a perfect poem, great memories come to mind. Well done. Best for a win.
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Date: 2/23/2023 6:02:00 PM
Oh, Yes brings to mind, how my ancestors never reveal much, almost life was a secret them days, so much more i found out at the age of 40, when back in the land of my birth, on holiday from New Zealand. I love this poem, Andrea, so much of you in there, the caring bits i love, as each stanza penetrates my brain. Harry.
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